Bài IELTS Task 1 ngày 3/3/3018 - Bar chart

Question

The bar chart illustrates the yearly salary for doctors and other workers in seven countries namely France, Italy, Czech, Germany, Finland, Switzerland and the US in 2004. It can be seen that the number of annualpay for doctors and othes workers in US accounted for the greatest rate, and doctor's salary were alway higher than other worker's.

To be more precise, the proportion of doctor's salary in US made up the highest rate at 120 thousands of US dollars, which nearly tripled the other worker's salary, and was by far the other countries. Similarly, there was an equal number in annual pay for doctors in France and Switzerland at 70 thousands of US dollars, while the figure of other worker 's salary accounted for a moderate rate at approximately 40 thousands of US dollars respectively.

Interestingly, the rate of yearly salary for other workers in Italy, Czech and Germany produce the same rate at 20 thousand of US dollars, saw one-third lower than doctor's salary in these countries. Likewise, 50 thousand of US dollars was the lowest rate of doctor's payment in Finland, which was just over a half of doctor's salary in US, and the annual payment for other workers was only a half of doctor's in Finland in 2004

Answer 1

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Suggestion: annual pay

2. You wrote: ...the number of annualpay for doctors and othes workers in US accounted for the greates...Suggestion: other, others

3. You wrote: ...greatest rate, and doctor's salary were alway higher than other worker's. To be more...Suggestion: always

4. You wrote: ... doctor's salary were alway higher than other worker's. To be more precise, the proportion ...Suggestion: an other worker, workers

5. You wrote: ... To be more precise, the proportion of doctor's salary in US made up the highest rate a...Suggestion: doctors

6. You wrote: ...alary in US made up the highest rate at 120 thousands of US dollars, which nearly tripled the ot...Suggestion: 120 thousand

7. You wrote: ...or doctors in France and Switzerland at 70 thousands of US dollars, while the figure of other w...Suggestion: 70 thousand

8. You wrote: ...ands of US dollars, while the figure of other worker 's salary accounted for a modera...Suggestion: the other worker, another worker

9. You wrote: ...f US dollars, while the figure of other worker 's salary accounted for a moderate rate at...Suggestion: worker's

10. You wrote: ...ed for a moderate rate at approximately 40 thousands of US dollars respectively. Interestingly...Suggestion: 40 thousand

11. You wrote: ...nd of US dollars was the lowest rate of doctor's payment in Finland, which was just over...Suggestion: doctors

12. You wrote: ... Finland, which was just over a half of doctor's salary in US, and the annual payment fo...Suggestion: doctors

13. You wrote: ...nt for other workers was only a half of doctor's in Finland in 2004Suggestion: doctors