Which do you prefer learning your lessons in the library or at home?

Question

When it comes to talking about choosing a place to learn, many peple have many different ideas.   From of my view, I myself like learn in at home with many reasons as follow.                       Firstly, learning my lesson at home is posstive time. I can learn any time in a day if i want study. I can arrang a suitable time schedule for me and i do not need enter as in the library. It clearly save many time for me. Learning  plays an important  role in my  life.                   Secondly, i feel learning at home is very  comfortable for me. I can have breafast, lunch,  evening or listen to music in  while i am learning.    I will take a rest after that i will continuous learning.                                  In brief, people discuss about learning at home or in the library. From my point of above view ,learning at home is more interesting than learning in the library because i can choosing a suitable time and comfortable.

Answer 1

Bạn sai vài lỗi khá cơ bản ạ:

- many peple have many different ideas => people

- From of my view, I myself like learn in at home=> From my point of view, I myself like to learn/learning at home

- learning my lesson at home is posstive time => lessons (thật ra mình không hiểu ý câu này là gì...)

-  I can learn any time in a day if i want study => bỏ "study"

- arrang a suitable time schedule for me and i do not need enter => arrange, I (luôn viết hoa), need to enter (need +to V)

- It clearly save many time for me => saves. Mình nghĩ viết là "It is definitely time-saving" sẽ hay hơn. Và time k đếm được nên phải là much time.

- Learning  plays an important  role in my  life.=> Bài không hỏi về hiểu quả của việc học nên câu này thừa.

- breafast, lunch,  evening  => breakfast. Bữa tối là "dinner", k phải "evening"

- In while i am learning => while learning.

-  I will take a rest after that i will continuous learning.  (mình k hiểu ý câu này, nó khá thừa)

-  i can choosing a suitable time and comfortable. => can + V nguyên thể nên phải là "I can choose". và sau comfortable cần một N.

Bại của bạn còn quá ngắn, chưa đưa ra được ví dụ, cũng không có các từ nối. Với có khá nhiều lỗi sai cơ bản, nên bạn cần xem lại nhé.