my English teacher

Question

There are more than thirty teachers in my school. All of them are very kind and friendly but

I would like to introduce my English teacher who made a strong impression on me.

Her name is Hao , she has been teaching in our school for 8 years.

She is 39 years old. She is tall, young, slim body with round face and bright smile.

She is a devoted and responsible teacher as she always prepares carefully all the lessons before going to class

The reasons for liking her are many. Firstly, She is a strict teacher however very funny and caring in nature. She always chooses the best ways to encourage everybody in class to improve their weak skills. I like the way she teaches us. After clearing the content of lesson, she gives us some exercises in the class and home work for the home. Next day, she asks questions related to the yesterday lesson and then starts another lesson. It’s easy for us to understand and remember the vocabulary and forms. Secondly, In my opinion she is not only my teacher but also my second mother at school. Last years, I had fallen ill and couldn’t go to school for a few days. I missed some lessons of her as well. She immediately contacted me and asked if I was better. She then helped me to come up with the loss of lessons before.

Answer 1

There are more than thirty teachers in my school. All of them are very kind and friendly but

I would like to introduce my English teacher who made a strong impression on me.

Her name is Hao , she has been teaching in our school for 8 years.

She is 39 years old. She is tall, young.  She has a  slim body with a round face and bright smile.

She is a devoted and responsible teacher as she always prepares carefully all the lessons before going to class.

The reasons for liking her are many. Firstly, She is a strict teacher however very funny and caring in nature. She always chooses the best ways to encourage everybody in class to improve their weak skills. I like the way she teaches us. After clearing the content of the lesson, she gives us some exercises in the class and homework for the home. Next day, she asks questions related to the yesterday lesson and then starts another lesson. It’s easy for us to understand and remember the vocabulary and forms. Secondly, In my opinion, she is not only my teacher but also my second mother at school. Last years, I had fallen ill and couldn’t go to school for a few days. I missed some lessons from her as well. She immediately contacted me and asked if I was better. She then helped me to come up with the loss of lessons before.

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Answer 2

"She is tall AND young WITH A slim body, A round face and A bright smile." 

"After clearing the content of lesson, she gives us some exercises in the class and HOMEWORK." Bản chất của homework là bài tập về nhà rồi nên bạn không cần thêm cụm "for the home" nữa nhé.

Mình hi vọng sớm được sửa bài bởi Team Writing 7.5: http://chuawritingmienphi.com/index.php/8256/cambridge-ielts-1-test-2-writing-task-1

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ok.thanks b nhiều nhé!