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I am difficult to open my soul with someone. Because when I want someone to become my friend. I usually pour my heart out and am hurt easily if they cheat on me. That is a reason why I only have a few friends during the mature process. Most of them are my high school friends and the other is my secondary school friend. We close each other for a long time because we have had many common viewpoints. It’s a valuable thing give us a good relationship without conflict. We shared everything, helped each other overcome sorrow, reduced the pressure on the breadline. But as we attend the college we that we always dreamed about it, there is a separation among us more and more. We have a little time to keep in touch each other. Because all of us have countless things that we need to do such as the studies, the love relationship, and the job.

Answer 1

That is a reason why=> that's why
A few=> few: mình nghĩ hợp lý hơn
 + A few friends: có một vài người bạn
 + Few friends: có rất ít bạn
during the mature process= in the process of growing up: văn phong mượt và giống tây hơn
 It’s a valuable thing give us a good relationship=> it's valuable for us to have a good relationship
We shared everything, helped each other overcome sorrow, reduced the pressure on the breadline: đoạn này dùng htd thôi, hoặc hiện tại hoàn thành vì nó chưa kết thúc
 a little=> little: như few bên trên đã nói
Đó là tất cả những gì mình thấy. Còn vài chỗ nữa mình cũng k chắc là mình đúng nên k dám phán

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thanks very much!!

 

Answer 2

 

 

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thanks very much!!