Family rules

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Family is a place to share love between everyone living under the same roof. Therefore, there has to have some rules so that everyone can live comfortably together. My family has its own rules. One important rule in my family is that there must be no swearing. Me and my brother will be punished if we swear. My grandparents said that it's not good. Of course, I agree with my grandparents so I'll obey this rule. Secondly, the younger must respect the elderly. That rule has existed for a long time and everybody have to follow it. according to my parents, it is a tradition of VNese. And the third important rule in my family is we should have good table manner. I must come to the table with clean hands and chew with the mouth closed. It's too strict but those rules help me improve myself and create a mutual trust and understanding family. Therefore, I'll train myself to follow tose rules to get along well with my family.

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A or the Family is a place to share the love among people <=> between everyone living under the same roof => it seems reluctant. Therefore, there => It has to have some rules so that everyone can live comfortably together. For example,  My family has a few  its own rules. One important rule Firstly, in my family is that there must be no swearing. Me I and my brother will be punished if we swear. My grandparents said that it's not good. Of course  I agree with my grandparents so I'll obey this rule. Secondly, the younger must respect the elderly. That rule has existed for a long time and everybody have to follow it. according to my parents, it is a tradition of VNese=> Vietnamese And the third important rule thirdly, in my family is we should have good table manner. I must come to the table with clean hands and chew with the mouth closed. It's too strict but those rules help me improve myself and create a mutual trust and understanding family. Therefore, I'll train myself to follow tose rules to get along well with my family.

 

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