task 1 - global market share for mobile phone market

Question

The table shows the global market share for different brands of mobile phone market in the years of 2005 and 2006.

Overall, three manufacturers –Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson— have their percentages of market share increased compared to other companies. Nokia always has the higher proportion in both 2005 and 2006.

In one year, the market share for Nokia increased nearly 3%, from 32.5% to 35%. While for Motorola, the company climbed from 17.7% to 21.1%. The percentage for Sony Ericsson manufacturer increased slightly lower than Nokia and Motorola, from 6.3% to 7.4%.

In contrast to the three manufacturers above, many other companies decreased in market share. For other companies that are not listed, while their percentage in 2005 was 19.2%, it ended up with 16.2% in 2006. Samsung’s market share decreased slightly less than other companies, from 12.7% to 11.8% respectively. Similar to the L.G Company, only 0.4% was dropped from 2005 to 2006.

 

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The table shows the global market share for different brands of (add the) mobile phone market in the years of 2005 and 2006

Overall, three manufacturers –Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson—  => (consider to eliminte this symbol _ ) namely Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson have their percentages of market share increased compared (2 động từ không thể viết cùng nhau) to other companies. Nokia always has the => (It is more logical using a instead the) a higher proportion in both 2005 and 2006.

In one year =>( it should be specific in year 2005 or 2006), the market share for Nokia increased nearly 3%, from 32.5% to 35%. While for Motorola, the company climbed from 17.7% to 21.1%. The percentage for Sony Ericsson manufacturer increased slightly lower than Nokia and Motorola, from 6.3% to 7.4%.

In contrast to the three manufacturers above, many other companies => (market share của công ty tăng giảm, chứ công ty bản thân nó không tăng giảm được nhé) decreased in market share. For other companies that are (biểu đồ năm 2005 và 2006, thì quá khứ) not listed, while their percentage (percentage add s)in 2005 was 19.2%, it ended up with 16.2% in 2006. Samsung’s market share decreased slightly less than other companies, from 12.7% to 11.8% respectively. Similar to the L.G Company, only 0.4% was dropped from 2005 to 2006.

 

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