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Question

The line graph illustrates three categories of fast food, namely hamburger, fish-chips, and pizza, which is consumed over the course of 20- year starting 1970 in the UK.

Looking at the line graph, it is immediately obvious that the number of fish-chips and hamburger experienced an upward trend with the exception of downward Pizza in the UK.

It can be seen clearly that starting in 1970, the sastitics of Pizza stood at 300 in the UK. The figures for fish-chips and hamburger was lower, at about 90 and 20 respectively. The number of Pizza which was consumed in the UK decreased gradually from about 300 to 200 in the first ten years. Besides that, the first ten years witnessed a steady increase in the number of fish-chips and hamburger of 50.

What is worthing noticing from the line graph that there was a dramatic rise in the proportion of fish-chips and hamburger which were consumed to 500 and 300 respectively in 1990. The proportion of  Pizza fluctuated around in the final ten years.

Answer 1

The line graph illustrates three categories of fast food, namely hamburger, fish-chips, and pizza, which is consumed over the course of 20- year starting 1970 in the UK.

Looking at the line graph, it is immediately obvious that the number of fish-chips and hamburger experienced an upward trend with the exception of downward Pizza in the UK.

It can be seen clearly that starting in 1970, the sastitics of Pizza stood at 300 in the UK. The figures for fish-chips and hamburger was lower, at about 90 and 20 respectively. The number of Pizza which was consumed in the UK decreased gradually from about 300 to 200 in the first ten years. Besides that, the first ten years witnessed a steady increase in the number of fish-chips and hamburger of 50.

What is worthing noticing from the line graph that there was a dramatic rise in the proportion of fish-chips and hamburger which were consumed to 500 and 300 respectively in 1990. The proportion of  Pizza fluctuated around in the final ten years.

​You didnt use many words to describe the line. It means that your writing is not clear so in my opinion your score is 6.5