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Question

Many people think that studying in group only brings us only advantage but disadvantage. Actually everything has both sides and the issue which I am about to mention is the same .First., studying in group help us to unite with other people , so the members of the group has harmony , as a result we are more skillful in putting across with strangers . Second . it has also make the issue which we have to solve become to solve easily because studying together creates a good or fun feeling . Finally , in a group has a strick schedule , which help members are more aware of studying .So , what are disavantages of studying in a gruop? that is members who are established in this group will be too reliable . They may only wait for the outcome of lesson but not to discuss with others . and it's not effective . Morover , studying in group sometimes has disagreement and discomfort . Consequently, they will make arguments and break off. For example , I hate somesone who has the same opinion with me . Im so annoyed about it . Next , studying in group is very time-consuming . he is so free to take it . Wheareas he only need 10 minutues to do this , but as a matter of a fact he is offer than 5 minutes . On the whole , studying in group has either advantage or disavntages

Answer 1

-Many people think that studying in group only brings us only advantage but disadvantage

->theo mình nghĩ thì k cần but disadvantages

-gruop ->spelling mistakes

- it has also make the issue -> sai cấu trúc 

-which we have to solve become to solve easily because studying together creates a good or fun feeling . ->which we have to solve become easier to deal with "có thể k hay lắm "

-which help -> which helps

-who are established in this group  " không phù hợp lắm"

-reliable-> mình nghĩ bạn dùng nhầm từ nên là dependent

-They may only wait for the outcome of lesson

but as a matter of a fact he is offer than 5 minutes 

=> 2 câu này không phù hợp lắm

-studying in group has either advantage or disavntages ->studying in group has both advantages and disadvantages

=> mình nghĩ bạn nên chú ý từ form của bài vd như phần first, second bạn làm ngắn nhưng đến finaly thì dài làm đoạn văn của bạn k cân xứng lắm 

Mình mong góp ý của mình có thể giúp bạn, có thể có thiếu hay sai sót mong bạn thông cảm. ^^