TASK 1: 09/09/2017, Library Layout

Question

The plan below show a school library five years ago and the same library now. The maps show a comparision between a school library five years ago and in present day. Overall, it can clearly be seen that lots of facilities have been installed and the library is now more mordern.

According to the plans, a few large studying tables, which located in the centre of the library, have been replaced by lots of smaller tables that are suitable for private use. Another replacement has taken place to the upper-right corner of the room, where desks for laptops are available instead of ones for computers. Moreover, one of the rows of bookshlves has also been replaced with these desks. Other changes was the function of the classroom and conference room, which have been turned into a recording studio and a conference room respectively.

Furthermore, the other row of bookshelves along with the meeting room to the left of the liibrary remain unchanged. Also, apart from being separated, no other changes have happened to the borrowing and returning desks.

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Answer 1

The maps show a comparision between a school library five years ago and in present day. Overall, it can clearly be seen that lots of facilities have been installed and the library is now more mordern. modern

According to the plans, a few large studying tables, which located in the centre of the library, have been replaced by lots of smaller tables ones that are suitable for private use. Another replacement has taken place to (at??) the upper-right corner of the room, where desks for laptops are available instead of ones for computers. Moreover, one of the rows of the bookshelves has also been replaced with these desks (không nên viết ntn nhé ạ) Other changes was are the functions of the classroom and conference room, which have been turned into a recording studio and a conference room respectively. (Đâu có thấy đổi function hả bạn ơi?) 

Furthermore, the other row of bookshelves along with the meeting room to the left of the liibrary remains unchanged. Also, apart from being separated, no other changes have happened to the borrowing and returning desks.

 

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