Ielts task 1 pie chart

Question

The chart illustrates the dwelling possessed and leased during the period from 1991 to 2007 in UK .

it was apparent that the number of home owner accounted for th most during the research period.By contrast, the figure of social housing maked up less than any others at the same time.

Home owner had been the most sort of housing occupying more rhan one half of all homes in 1991. By the follow is social renting at round 25% . Sixteen years later, the quantity of home proprietor climed to over 72%. However, there was a dramatically decrease in social renting with a half as the previous years.

the others sector which effect on inhabitance in uK was private renting remained unchanged in 1991 and 2007. Beside, the number of social housing downward from 13% to 8% at the same period

Answer 1

The chart illustrates the dwelling possessed and leased during the period from 1991 to 2007 in the UK.

it was apparent => clear that the number of home owner accounted for th most during the research period . => over the period given. By contrast, the figure of social housing maked up (chỗ này mình không hiểu ý bạn lắm) less than any others at the same time.

Home owner had been the most sort of housing occupying more rhan one half of all homes in 1991. By the follow is social renting at round 25% . Sixteen years later, the quantity of home proprietor climed => climbed to over 72%. However, there was a dramatically => dramatic decrease in social renting with a half as the previous years.

the others sector effecting on inhabitance in the UK was private renting remained (câu có 2 động từ?) unchanged in 1991 and 2007. Beside, the number of social housing (câu chưa có động từ?) downward from 13% to 8% at the same period => over the period shown.

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