Bài IELTS Task 1 - Pie Chart

Question

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The pie charts compare undergraduates and postgraduates in term of the reasons why they decide to study at Parker University.

Overall, cost and reputation of university accounts for the largest percentages of both objects’ reasons.In addition, there are a similar number of people having reasons that are location, availability of accommodation and other ones.

Regarding to location , the figure for undergraduates is slightly more than those for postgraduates, at exactly 8 % and 6 %, respectively. Undergraduates choosing to go to this university for other reasons is 2 % more than Postgraduates. In contrast, 8 % for availability of accommodation is the figure for postgraduates while there are 7 % of undergraduates having this reason.

In term of reputation of university, the percentage for postgraduates is 42% and that for undergraduates is just 35%. Besides, the proportion of postgraduates counting for cost is 8% higher than that of undergraduates. Finally, the number of undergraduates choose to go to this school for personal recommodation  are three times as the number of postgraduates. 

Answer 1

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