People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

Question

Nowadays, the number of crimes is increasingly rapidly. This makes many people often experienced a feeling of being dangerous when they both stay in their houses and go out. This essay will be examine some reasons why people feel frightened and then propose some solutions. 

Firstly, today the gap between the rich and the poor is being widened. This leads to unemployment and hard life for poor people. This is a reason which causes a rise in crime rate for majority of the poor. For example, burglars can break into the house of rich people to steal their property. Furthermore, robbers can rob the jewelery, the phone when people lack vigilance in crowded places. In addition to this, if a person resist, burglars or robbers may commnit murders. Secondly, these days have more and more dangers on the road. Most accidents are caused by illegal traffic offences. For instance, who are over-speeding or drunk-driving will not control their driving and cause accidents to participants traffic. 

To solve this problem the government should have more effective solutions, First of all, leaders should tackle the issue of unemployment. Especially, they ought to offer free vocational courses for the poor. They have to put offenders in education centers. Therefore, these people can find stable jobs. This leads to reduce crime rate. After this, government had better install surveillance cameras and enable the police to enforce safety on the road. Moreover, government ought to increase the punishment for offences.

In conclusion, there are some reasons why people today feel unsafe either at home or they are out, and some measures should be taken to solve this problem.

Answer 1

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