The line graph compares the consumption of meat and poultry in the US between 1955 and 2012.
It is noticeable that beef was by far the most popular meat throughout the 54 year period except the last 3 years. Also, there was a dramatic increase in the consumption of broilers throughout the period shown.
From 1955 to 1976, the figure for beef consumption experienced a significant rise from around 60 pound to its peak at 90 pounds per capita. Similarly, the number of broilers consumers also increased gradually from 12 to 30 per person during this period, whereas the consumption of pork and turkey remained stable at approximately 50 and almost 10 pounds respectively.
In the following 36 years, beef became less popular and led to the steady decline from its peak at 90 pounds to just over 50 pounds in 2012. By contrast, the figure of the consumption of broilers continued to rise and eventually surpassed that of beef, reaching 58 pounds per capita. At the same time, there was no significant change for the consumption of pork and turkey. To be more specific, those figure ended up at 42 and 12 separately.
In conclusion, beef consumption is still a favorite meat although it has a drop in the last 3 years while the least popular one is turkey.
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There is an obvious difference in the use of generated electricity sources
This report describes the suppplies from which five european countries produce electricity
In general,Germany uses the highest number of sources of generate electricity.Whereas,Norway use them the least of five european countries.
According to the provide table,thermal power is widely used for the production of electricity in Germany and the UK.In both countries it shows more than fitty percent of the total electricity generated.Whereasmusing thermal in Norway is relatively low which represents less than 1times compared to Germany in total.However,it is worth mentioning that Norway uses hydropower the most of five european countries...Compared to Norway,Germany and the UK make little use of hydropower.
Nuclear plants are the main source of electricity for France.Such countries as germany ,Spain and the UK also produce nuclear power ,however,with the considerably low percent compared to their total amounts,Norway seems not to use any nuclearpower.Geothermal and other alternative sources of generated electricity are used at a percentage of no more than two percent in all cases
It is clear that from the data given that There is an obvious difference in the use of generated electricity sources
There is no doubt that with the development/ Advancement of modern society, the widespread use of high technological devices is increasing day by day. However, the loss of direct communication due to the use of these devices is still a controversial issue. While I believe that, to some extent, these advanced appliances apparently bring benefits for users, I would argue that the abuse of these devices will/would decrease the ability to communicate face to face.
On the one hand, there are a variety of/ varieties of reasons why mobile phones and computers are beneficial. The obvious reason is that /One reason is that, these appliances make it easier for people to contact since they save much time for other tasks. With the booming growth of many connecting applications such as Facebook, Skype or Viber, people are able to connect to each other in a short time instead of spending hours driving over hundreds of kilometers. In addition, with the development of social media network, making friend is much simpler while various kinds of online site enable them to keep in touch wherever they are.
On the other hand, I believe that spending too much time with private electronic equipment will limit the ability of communication. Firstly, the abuse of these modern devices would reduce the time for real communication and this lead to a negative impact on human relationships. Because of the extremely/ extreme focusing on mobile phones or computers, people no longer paying attention on what other say, or it seems people do not need to say anything. According to UK Daily Mail, in England, more than 60% of women in long-term relationships who were surveyed said high tech devices interfere with their free time together. Secondly, by using indirect communication such as texting massage or talking via mobiles, people can lose their confidence when they have to talk in front of the crowd. For example, many children are addicted in their smart phone so that they become shy and become lacking the skill of presentation.
In conclusion, although there is undeniable advantages which modern appliances bring us, it is true that the ability of face-to-face communication will be detrimentally influenced badly by the over use of technology.
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