Introduction Writing

Question

Hi, everyone. I think introduction is an important part in an essay. Firstly, it gives the audience an overview about what we are going to discuss so It needs to mention all requirements in the question. Secondly, It should not be too long because time consumption should be contributed to main paragraphs because the main body accounts for allmost all marks that we may achieve.

The following is one among many essay questions that I am practicing introduction writing. I hope to receive some advice for it. Thank you!

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Introduction.

Many people have the orientation of career at their early age and adhere to it. To a certain extent I agree that the pursuit of a fixed goal could lead to a satisfying working life. However, I think, the flexible adjustment of the career path when appropriate could open a door to the future of better prospect.

Answer 1

Hi, everyone. I think introduction is an important part in an essay. Firstly, it gives the audience an overview about what we are going to discuss (,)so It needs to mention all requirements in the question. Secondly, It should not be too long because consumption time should be contributed to main paragraphs because the main body accounts for almost all marks that we may achieve.

The following is one among many essay questions that I am practicing introduction writing. I hope to receive some advice for it. Thank you!

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Introduction.

Many people have the orientation of career at their early age and adhere to it. To a certain extent I agree that the pursuit of a fixed goal could lead to a satisfying working life. However, I think, the flexible adjustment of the career path when appropriate could open a door to the future of better prospect.

Answer 2

Hi,

I have a feeling that your writing skill is quite good. You make very few mistakes and writing style is clear and coherent. I think you will get a hight result in the IELTS test.

I have tooken a look at your introduction and have some comments. Pls see them below :)

Hi, everyone. I think introduction is an important part in an essay. Firstly, it gives the audience an overview about what we are going to discuss so It needs to mention all requirements in the question. Secondly, It should not be too long because time consumption should be contributed to main paragraphs because the main body accounts for allmost all marks that we may achieve.

The following is one among many essay questions that I am practicing introduction writing. I hope to receive some advice for it. Thank you!

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Introduction.

Many people have the orientation of career at their early age and adhere to it. To a certain extent, I agree that the pursuit of a fixed goal pursuing a fixed goal could lead to a satisfying working life. However, I think, the flexible adjustment of the career path when appropriate could open a door to the future of a better prospect.

Answer 3

Hi, everyone. I think introduction is an important part in an essay. Firstly, it gives the audience an overview about what we are going to discuss, so It needs to mention all requirements in the question. Secondly, It should not be too long because time consumption consumption time should be contributed to main paragraphs because the main body accounts for allmost almost all marks that we may achieve.

The following is one among many essay questions that I am practicing introduction writing. I hope to receive some advice for it. Thank you!

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Introduction.

Many people have the orientation of career at their early age and adhere to it. To a certain extent, I agree that the pursuit of pursuing a fixed goal could lead to a satisfying working life. However, I think, the flexible adjustment of the career path when appropriate could open a door to the future of a better prospect.