Some people believe that studying in a college or uinversity is the best way .... Discuss both view and give your opinion
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Some people believe that studying in a college or uinversity is the best way for student to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both view and give your opinion

The methodology of educating students to become full-fledged members has tremendously evolved as a major debate in recent years. There are a number of people who subscribes to the viewpoint that in order to achieve the success, young people should register courses in university which is considered as the best measure. However, others argue that it is unneccessary to attend tertiary education, children only need to leave schools as soon as possible to experience real life to learn valuable skills for developing career. From my perspective, the combination of both suggestions might be the feasible solution for accomplishment.

To start with, learning knowledge in higher education plays an indispensible role in contributing prosperity of individuals. Terticary education provides for learners a variety of characterized comprehension in their majors which is very useful when applying in reality. In addition, some special jobs are required to be trained in university such as nuclear energy, law, astronomy, etc. So, if such students have not attended lectures in their institues, they would never know how to upgrade their career in these fields. For instance, many talent students reached reputative rewards from world well-known universities because of their effort and persistence in pursuing scientific researches that are serving its soceity. Many of them proceed along literate path and accomplish certain repuation.

On the other words, may students drop out their schooling and go outside to set up their own career instead of placing on schools for a long time and reward prestigeous degrees. Nowadays, experience has changed into the vital element in any success in lieu of knowledge in schools. Most billionaires around the world who are less educated by schools because they would like to train real expertise from doing works in marketplace to get experience and establish their apparatus by themselves. Many people are in very doubt emotion about the eduactional quality since numerous graduates become unemployment owing to deficient experiece and appitude. Thereby, trying hand in various jobs in early ages will create opportunities for young people to find their interest that might help them determine what career is most suitable for them.

In conclusion, following courses in tertiary education or leaving schools for independent development also contain merits and demerits. I am of opinion that the achievement of any people comprises of the mixture between studying essential knowledge in institutes and practising what to be taught in solving actual problems.

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The methodology (do you mean ideology?) of educating students to become full-fledged members has tremendously evolved (evolve is used to describe process) as a major debate in recent years. There are a number of people who subscribes to the viewpoint that in order to achieve the success, as the best measure, young people should register courses in university which is considered as the best measure (you shouldnt use to much relative clauses in one sentence). However, others argue that it is unneccessary to attend tertiary education, children only need to leave schools as soon as possible (shouldnt make an absolute statement) to experience real life to learn valuable skills for developing career. From my perspective, the combination of both suggestions might be the most feasible solution for accomplishment.

To start with, learning (how abt acquiring) knowledge in higher education plays an indispensible role in contributing prosperity of individuals. Terticary education provides for learners a variety of characterized comprehension in their majors which is very useful when applying in reality. In addition, some special jobs are required to be trained in university training such as nuclear energy, law, astronomy, etc (shouldnt use etc in IELTS writing). So, if such students have not attended lectures in their institues, they would never be unlikely to know how to upgrade their career in these fields (there is always another way, dont make absolute sentence). For instance, many talented students reached reputative rewards from world well-known universities because of their effort and persistence in pursuing scientific researches that are  to serveing its soceity. Many of them proceed along literate path and accomplish certain reputation.
 

I think you are trying hard to put all the academic words in your writing, and to show off your grammar too. However, your sentences are too long, making it hard to follow up. Well, it's just my two-cents.   

 

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