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The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words
The graph shows people accessed to new music place on the Internet In fifteen days period time namely personal choice and pop popularity music.
The overall trend shows variation with fair increased towards the end of the periods.
Starting with Music Choice online stood at 40,000 thousands of people connected to this site on the first day. Thereafter it reduced a half of them on next day. In contrast to this pop lovers were accessed to 120,000 thousand of viewers on day 1 which declined mildly on the next day. However, after 3rd day the volume of linking to music lines on Internet dipped suddenly with a music choice at 20 viewers and 30 viewers of a pop parade on the 7th day (decreased by 90 connecters calculated from the first day). Then both of them moved in sideway from 20 to 40 viewers until day 9.
From day 9, Pop parade bounced significantly when it broken out from 40 to 150 viewers on the 11th day as well as music choice stopped increased fairly at 120 listeners the same day. Later Pop parade adjusted from 150 to 80 viewers on the 13th day before it reached a peak of highest on the 15th day at 170 listeners. In contrast with Music Choice slipped down between 80 and 60 viewers on the same day.
With analyzing data above, the level of the Pop parade were fluctuated more than the proportion of Music Choice as well as the volume of connecting on the last of the report.
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