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Question

Dear Maria,

I haven’t heard from you for a while. How have you been? I wish everything is going well with you. I have finished my final exam and started working a part- time job recently.

Enough of all that. I will make a trip to Kankali village for two or three weeks this summer vacation. I will be very happy if you could let me know the age of volunteers. Are they the same age as me? Would you also tell me what types of clothes I should bring to Kankali to make sure that I won’t get into trouble with different weather conditions. What is more, I am wondering whether Nepal food is easy to eat or not? Could you tell me some special dishes that I should try ?

Finally, I’m a little bit nervous about the Annapurrna trail. Please tell me if the project requires a good physical stamina or not and what I should prepare for the trail.

That’s all for now.I’d better go. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Load of love,

Sophie
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Answer 1

Dear Maria,

I haven’t heard from you for a while. How have you been? I wish everything is going well with you. I have finished my final exam and started working a part- time job recently. => mình nghĩ nên sửa thành "have got a part-time job recently".

Enough of all that. I will make a trip to Kankali village for two or three weeks this summer vacation. I will be very happy if you could let me know the age of volunteers.=> sửa thành "I would be very..."  hoặc "...if you can let me..." Are they the same age as me? Would you also tell me what types of clothes I should bring to Kankali to make sure that I won’t get into trouble with different weather conditions. What is more, I am wondering whether Nepal food is easy to eat or not? Could you tell me some special dishes that I should try ?

Finally, I’m a little bit nervous about the Annapurrna trail. Please tell me if the project requires a good physical stamina or not and what I should prepare for the trail.

That’s all for now.I’d better go. I look forward to hearing from you soon.