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Question

The society are more and more growing,the integration trend especially the teenager.Almost,they like style of clothes unique and dynamic .They follow new frend whereas their parents don't think so.They disagree.So ,it leads to conflict between children and parents in family.

Answer 1

 

Hi, Bạn có thể chỉnh lại như sau:

The society is more and more growing,the integration trend especially the teenager ??? Almost,they like style of clothes unique and dynamic .They follow new trend whereas their parents don't think so.They disagree.Therefore ,it leads to conflict between children and parents in family.

Answer 2

Xin lỗi phải nói cái này nhưng mà mình ko hiểu lắm nội dung bạn viết nên ko biết sửa sao cho phù hợp.

Tuy vậy có một số lỗi ngữ pháp có thể sửa như sau:

The society are (is) more and more growing,the integration trend, especially the teenager (2 cụm danh từ "integration trend" và "teenager" không có quan hệ thượng hạ vị nên dùng especially là không phù hợp, hơn nữa câu này thiếu vị ngữ)?.Almost,they like (mình nghĩ nên thêm mạo từ the) style of clothes unique and dynamic (đảo vị trí noun và adj như này mình chỉ thường thấy trong văn nói).They follow new frend whereas their parents don't think so.They disagree. So ,it leads to conflict between children and parents in family.

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Answer 3

The society are is more and more growing growing more and more, the integration trend especially the teenager. Almost they like style of clothes unique and dynamic clothes that are unique and dynamic.They follow new  frend trend whereas their parents don't think so.They disagree. So,it leads to conflict between children and parents in a family.

Nếu là mình thì mình sẽ viết như sau:

The society is changing and growing rapidly, including the teenagers. They would do anything to follow new trends which appear on social media every day whereas their parents have a different idea about this. The phenomenon leads to conflicts between children and parents in a family.

Đó là ý kiến của mình. Bạn hãy cố lên nhé :)