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The line chart depicts how many travelers who visited to three museums in London from June 2013 to September 2013.

It is clear that the quantity of people going the British Museum was by far highest in the chart. It is also noted that there was some fluctuations in the numbers of visitors during the research period.

In June, exactly 600 thousand travelers chose British Museum for their destination. The figures for Science Museum and Natural History Museum was lower, at about 500 thousand and 400 thousand respectively. In next month, there was a significant rise in the number of visitors to British Museum and it then peaked at 730 thousand, which was the highest point in the chart whereas the visitors of other two museums decreased.

By September, British Museum was the well most-visited museum in London. With a wild fluctuation between 500 thousand and 800 thousand in the previous period, the number of British travelers reached at around 650 thousand in September, compared to nearly 500 thousand visitors of Science Museum and 600 thousand of those visiting Natural History Museum.

Answer 1

The line chart depicts how many travelers who visited to three museums in London from June 2013 to September 2013.

It is clear that the quantity of people going the British Museum was by far highest in the chart. It is also noted that there were some fluctuations in the numbers of visitors during the research period.

In June, exactly 600 thousand travelers chose British Museum for their destinations. The figures for Science Museum and Natural History Museum were lower, at about 500 thousand and 400 thousand respectively. In next month, there was a significant rise in the number of visitors to British Museum and it then peaked at 730 thousand, which was the highest point in the chart whereas the visitors of other two museums decreased.

 

 

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