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Some people feel that in order to improve the quality of our education we should encourage high school students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that it will cause the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. To what extend u agree

Issue related to high school students’ assessment to teachers has frequently discussed these days. Some people are of the opinion that the enhancement of education needs students’ evaluation, while others argue that it might lead to disrespect of students. Nevertheless, I find both viewpoints convincing for the following reasons.

On the one hand, some people believe that students ought not to criticize their teachers. To begin with, it is true that minors have insufficient knowledge to assess their educators. To clarify, teachers are those well-trained to meet teaching requirements and had experienced students’ lives. Whereby, they might acknowledge that what are the best for their students. Furthermore, if we place the right to evaluate the elder to youngsters before their responsible ages, they might they would become less probable law- abiding citizens. For examples, the rate of juvenile delinquents in western nations where they could criticize their teachers easily is far higher than that in Eastern countries such as Japanese.

On the other hand, others assert that students’ criticism would improve the teaching quality. It is clear that the teaching methods of teachers nowadays sometimes do not engage students. Take Asian education for the example, where teacher- centred paradigm is placed higher that student-centered one and students ‘words are weightless. As a result, the lessons in high schools seem very monotonous because the teachers keep teaching in the same ways which do not meet students’ interest.

As far as I am concerned, feedbacks from students are seemed as an effective way to enhance education system. However, students must do it in very respectful and polite ways.

In short, students’ evaluation has occurred in many countries and it has showed its effectiveness in bettering off education. We should encourage it to be spread to other countries.

Mình cũng mún thắc mắc là nếu dang opinion mà mình partly agree nhu trên thì có ổn ko ? 

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Issue related to high school students’ assessment to teachers has frequently discussed these days. Some people are of the opinion that the enhancement of education needs students’ evaluation, while others argue that it might lead to disrespect of students. Nevertheless, I find both viewpoints convincing for the following reasons.

On the one hand, some people believe that students ought not to criticize their teachers. To begin with, it is true that minors have insufficient knowledge to assess their educators. To clarify, teachers are those well-trained to meet teaching requirements and had experienced students’ lives. Whereby, they might acknowledge that what are the best for their students. Furthermore, if we place the right to evaluate the elder to youngsters before their responsible ages, they might they would become less probable law- abiding citizens. For examples, the rate of juvenile delinquents in western nations where they could criticize their teachers easily is far higher than that in Eastern countries such as Japanese.

On the other hand, others assert that students’ criticism would improve the teaching quality. It is clear that the teaching methods of teachers nowadays sometimes do not engage students. Take Asian education for the example, where teacher- centred paradigm is placed higher that student-centered one and students ‘words are weightless. As a result, the lessons in high schools seem very monotonous because the teachers keep teaching in the same ways which do not meet students’ interest.

As far as I am concerned, feedbacks from students are seemed as an effective way to enhance education system. However, students must do it in very respectful and polite ways.

In short, students’ evaluation has occurred in many countries and it has showed its effectiveness in bettering off education. We should encourage it to be spread to other countries.

Đọc hết cả bài rồi mình không thấy lỗi chính tả nào cả, theo mình là được viết kiểu đồng ý với cả 2 ý kiến  , miễn sao cứ nói rõ ràng trong mở bài là được !
Chúc cậu thi tốt !
Thi xong nếu rảnh góp ý cho tớ với nhé !

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