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Question

Given are two figure concerning electricity in the USA. The first provides data on the rates of typical electricity demand among winter and summer;  the second indicates the electricity usage for the various home appliance.

It is apparent from the information provided that the rate of electricity demand increase exponentially during the day and fall at the end of the day. Is is evident that that the demand for electricity in the winter is obviously higher than in the summer. From a mere 20000 units of electricity, the summer figure gradually declines to a lower point at a rough 13000 units at 9. The figure experienced a significant upward trend from 9 to around 12 to 15, then drop to a vicinity of 14000. Summer remain unchanged while the winter sharply rises to approximately 49000 units.

As for the second graph, the Lighting, TV, radio place the largest part at 52,5%; Ovens kettles, washing machines hold up a 17,5%. Not surprisingly that  Heating rooms, heating water group and Vacuum cleaners, food mixers take the same level at 15%.

 

Answer 1

Given are two figure concerning electricity in the USA.  (Câu này bạn nên viết lại thành 2 biểu đồ cung cấp thông tin về ...)  The first provides data on the rates of typical electricity demand among winter and summer;  the second one indicates the electricity usage for the various home appliance. 

It is apparent from the information provided that the rate of electricity demand increase exponentially during the day and fall at the end of the day. Is is evident that that the demand for electricity in the winter is obviously higher than in the summer. From a mere 20000 units of electricity, the summer figure gradually declines to a lower point at a rough 13000 units at 9am. The figure experienced a significant upward trend from 9am to around 12 to 15(bạn chọn giờ luôn, about 13pm chẳng hạn), then drop to a vicinity of 14000. Summer remain unchanged while the winter sharply rises to approximately 49000 units. (Nếu xét trên cùng 1 biểu đồ thì 2 đối tượng phải đc xét giống nhau, mình thấy bạn nói nhiều về summer quá mà winter chẳng có gì mấy)

As for the second graph, the Lighting, TV, radio place the largest part at 52,5%(Bạn xem lại biểu đồ đi, nhầm rồi bạn); Ovens kettles, washing machines hold up a 17,5%. Not surprisingly that  Heating rooms, heating water group and Vacuum cleaners, food mixers take the same level at 15%.