Đề thi IELTS Writing task 2 - 07/11/2015 - Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck ...

Question

TOPIC task 2 của tuần này ngày 07/11/2015 :

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

-------------------------------------------------

 

Hướng dẫn sử dụng trong top Chữa đề IELTS hàng tuần:

Step 1: Click  ở cuối mỗi bài viết được post lên trong top để nhận xét bài viết của các mem khác (ưu tiên những bài chưa có góp ý nào nhé ^^ )

Step 2: Click nút  ở cuối topic này để post bài bạn viết lên. 

Step 2.5: Và đừng quên góp ý cho những bài viết trong mục "Bài chưa có góp ý" để kiếm thêm point nhé :)

Luật của Top:

- Mỗi bạn sẽ post bài viết của mình lên dưới dạng góp ý (+2 point cho mỗi bài viết).

- Các bạn sẽ cùng viết, vote và nhận xét bài lẫn nhau trong Topic này.

- Bài viết nào được vote nhiều nhất sẽ được chọn làm bài viết hay nhất (+4 point).

 

Hạn chót nộp bài sẽ là 12h trưa sáng thứ 7 tuần này nhé :)

Have fun !

--------------------

 

Answer 1

Mong các anh, các chị coi giúp em bài này với, em cảm ơn nhiều! Thanks in advance.

Expertise to achieve great successfulness has constantly evolved as a major debate of topic among citizens in recent years. There are a number of residents who subscribe to the point that extraordinary achievers must predominantly have fortunateness. Personally, I strongly contend that the perception is far from being the best method to reach success.

There is no doubt that luckiness plays an indispensible role to constitute any accomplishments. Typically, businessmen who would like to succeed in their careers, have to possess certain prosperity when they initially begin operating entrepreneurship strategy. Such blessedness probably originates from family’s supportive allowances, friends’ motivation, etc. Another significant reason supporting this statement is that in multiple situations, those cannot start up to conduct their expectations without the helpfulness of neighboring people.

On the other hand, I am persuaded that in spite of full favorable materials, people still receive failure in case that they do not accurately manipulate those advantages. For example, those were born with a silver spoon in mouth are seen as fortunate citizens and they are living in prestigious and victory foundation. However, if they did not try their best to comprehend their personality and proficiency, such wealthy people would face a lot of unavoidable challenges when they contact with tough reality. Many youngsters, though they have not had luckiness in their lives, thanks to their tireless attempts together with patience and persistence, they would climb on reputable ladder on their own feet.

In conclusion, although fortunateness occupies a crucial position in every successful people, I am of opinion that luckiness will be defused, unless the best effort and perseverance are appeared.

(269 words)

Answer 2

Vấn đề nằm ở chỗ là mình bí ý rồi, bạn nào vui lòng giúp mình khai triển thêm ý tưởng cho 2 bodies được không ( bài này vừa khít 250 words )  mình cám ơn nhiều! ( Ngu văn nó khổ thế đó )

Luckiness is said to be one of the overwhelmingly pivotal elements to achieve whatever people desire. This is advocated by many supporters , while others persist that only via human power , will they gain their own ambition ,as will be discussed beneath

One the one hand , good fortune sporadically generate a myriad of sublime works in many aspect of life . In fact , Technology and Art have witnessed a great amount of innovation and renovation which more half of them  have the emergence of ingredients based upon luckiness. For example , Flappy Bird, a worldwide gaming blockbuster , of which owner – Nguyen Ha Dong got the globally splendid success , even though his initial pursuit of generating this game was just  for fun and for testing his ability without any commercial scheme  . ........

On the other hand, luckiness probably occurred along with surprising ideas, but not a decisive point to acquire satisfactory achievements , unless people express their intrinsic attitudes such as perseverance , hard-working, passion and the like in order to transform opportunities to advantages . Nick Vujicic , a well-known motivation speaker borned with the absence of 4 all limbs is the person who apparently demonstrated to whoever thought that bad fortune means inability.................

Once elucidated abovementioned issues , I conclude that no matter how many  creative ideals or sources you have stemmed from the randomness of life , only the public recognize how hard your work to convert such unfavorable capital to successful works

Comments

Trình độ IELTS Writing của mình cũng à tờ lờ mờ. Vì thích idea của bạn nên mình develop theo cách riêng của mình, không dám có góp ý gì với bản chính. Cùng cố gắng nhé.

Many people persist that luck is the most important element in attaining one’s goals. Personally, I disagree with this point of view and advocate the notion that ones can archieve their targets only when they work hard and have passion on what they pursuit

It can not be dynied that good fortune has generated some cases of success in actual life. Entertainment is the field which may have witnessed many successors whose names unexpectedly become popular and regularly be called in Entertainment channels. Take Nguyen Ha Dong as typical example of a winner by fortune with his global well-known game Flappy Brid, which turns Nguyen Ha Dong from nomal young boy into excellent game programer. Flappy Bird born with initial aims for fun and testing Dong’s ability without involvement of commercial scheme has been crazily loved by gamers over the world and bring the considerable amount of money to it s owner.

However, it is not luck but others factors which determine the achivements namely hard work and passion. Many greatest people assure that their goals are attained by their non-stop efforts and endless love to their fields they pursuit. They can be named through world history and spreading over most fields such as Thomas Edison, Bill Gates, Steve Jobs., etc…. However, the person I would like to mention the most in the list is very particular one, his name is Nick Vuijicic. Nick is very special succesor as fortune seems not visit him since he was born. With the absence of all four limbs, Nick still become a great speaker in the world and is to be an energetic inspiration and motivation for millions people in the world. He is good example for self-exercising and evalasting passion in life.

To conclude, luck may lead to success in a few cases but achievement will come and be regconized if one who seriously work hard and passionate what they pursuit.

 

Answer 3

 

 

There are some people who attribute their success entirely to luck. To my way of thinking, I partially agree with this opinion as many other factors can contribute to one's achievements.

On the one hand, it is undeniable there are some cases where people attain their goals by sheer luck. This means that they hardly need to work hard while still live an easy life as they are provided with many opportunities by chance. For instance, through the acts of gambling or buying lottery which mostly depend on luck to win, many people become a billionaire without much investment. Another example can be seen in many students who study little but still pass exams with flying colours as many tests ask exactly what they only learn. From these examples , it is possible that people can achieve much with little effort.

On the other hand, depending on luck, people can run the risk of getting themselves in danger. To specify, many people may run into outstanding debts since there is a high chance of people losing a fortune for gambling or play lottery. In the case of students, they can be lacking in essential knowledge due to their studying for the sake of passing exams. Rather than let luck manipulate the possibility of success , many people guarantee their accomplishments by determination and hard work. Apparently, there are more famous people for their extraordinary abilities than individuals succeeding by means of luck. Thomas Edison is a typical example of industrious people with noticeable achievements. Only after numerous failed experiments could he invent the light bulb, which is acknowledged by all generations of humankind. In addition, many unfortunate people with disabilities are determined to attain their goals and inspire many yound people with their great contributions to the society , namely Nick Vujicic - the man without four limbs.

In conclusion, while luck determine the possibility of achieving goals to some extent, other factors like determination and hard work should be considered

 Mọi người xem và sửa giúo mình với

Answer 4

The debate over the question of whether or not  luck plays a determinant role to succeed in goal achievement is heated constantly. I strongly believe that talent and determination are two of most essential elements to record great achievements, while good fortune is not major key.

 

On the road to success, people's natural ability and industry have to be consider as the most basic factors. Firstly, inborn ability enable people to excel at particular skills that makes them easily reach a peak in their career. For instance, Lionel Messi have become the best footballer for various recent years by extraordinary skill of playing football. Besides, effort is another inevitable part to get their aims, people with their great expertise can not be talented unless they are adequately trained and practiced constantly for  long period of time. Therefore, people need to be hard-working to attain their goals.

 

However, importance of luck can not be denied in the formula of success because natural ability and determination are just necessary conditions that don not guarantee the attain of aims. In other words, to achieve desirable results, people need have a integrated combination of three component. Another significant point of view, good fortune only comes to people who have worked hard and trained efforfully. Thus, people should improve their own ability prior to thinking about having luck.

To summary, good fortune is not reliable key to determine goal attainment, while there are much more significant factors, namely natural ability and determination.