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Question

 

 Everyone should become a vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 

    Recently, a number of people have intention to be on a vegetarian diets as they think fat-containing foods such as meat are doing harm to their health.In my view, I strongly disagree with this idea

    Firstly, the primary reasons opposing to the idea is that meat provides us an enormous variety of nutrition factors. By eating meat , people will have an sufficient energy to work, study or do many leisure activities.For instance, vitamin B12 and vitamin D3 are indispensable for human being. A survey indicates that people who suffer from vitamin B12 deficiency are often lead to Alzheimer Disease while residents who lack of vitamin D3 are sometimes diagnosed with cancers.

  Another contributing factor is that meat is essential for adolescence's growth. This means that the youths combining meat with daily diets are strikingly than the others.In other words ,young residents do not have preference with vegetarianism due to their eating habits.Because they find it ea sy to eat meat than a solely vegetable meal.Of course, vegetarian diets have its obvious benefits but eating merely vegetable will cause many health problems when our body are not supplied protein or fat elements.

In conclusion, it is my firm belief that people should better eat meat than following a vegetarian diets.Meanwhile, eating options are up to individual 's preference.But I think eating meat  will help us to have enough nutrient and prevent many serious diseases.

 

 

Answer 1

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