IELTS : ARE PARENTS THE BEST TEACHER ?

Question

            ARE PARENTS THE BEST TEACHER ?

 

Every child at birth are the same, but why are there some children become smart and docile, while some is normal, even an idiot ? The answer is the educated of parents.  For children in early life , the educational method of parents is very important, that make them to be a good or a bad , a famous or an idiot man. In fact, parents are the most important teacher but not the best teacher.

 

The most common, the educated of parents are good for their sons. They are  the first teachers we have in our lives. They teach us to walk, to speak, and to have good manners before we reach "the real world." nobody can understand the children better than the parents do. They watch over their children from the early time, so they know what their son or daughter is thinking exactly. So they can teach their child what is right, wrong, what can be done and what cannot more easy than anyone else. Parent are used to the youth, they know what we think in this age and  have enough experiences to be beside and support us. In real, parent love always their son mostly.

 

However, there are some bad mother, father or both of them. They don’t understand their son and don’t need to know that, they just want the childs to do anything they ordered. That thing exist in many family both developed country and developing country. In some families, many parents are dour and fogy, they keep ancient laws, which makes hard for their son and leads to more problems.

 

In conclusion, the most important teachers for children are their parents,who have taught them from the first lesson to many things in life with all their love and carying. Althought There are some good or bad parents, but I belive in any parents having the heart, always love their child. 

Answer 1

that make them to be a good or a bad , a famous or an idiot man nên sửa thành that make them be good or bad, successful or unsuccessful.

The most common nên sửa thành firstly

the educated of parents are nên sửa thành the education of parents is 

nobody can understand the children better than the parents do nen sửa thành nobody can understand the children better than their parents

 So they can teach their child what is right, wrong, what can be done and what cannot more easy than anyone else nên sửa thành So they can teach their child what is right, what is wrong easier than anyone else

Parent areused to the youth thành Parents used to be young

 to be beside and support us thành to support us

In real, parent love always their son mostly thành in reality, parents always love their children

there are some bad mother, father or both of them thành there are some bad mothers and fathers