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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Responsibility in educating a kid to be a kind citizen is being in disputation that should belong to either family or educational institution. These is essay is going to discuss that both these opinions own suitable arguments and society need the roles from parents as well as school.

Firstly, it is the true that father and mother always love children unconditionally. As consequence, they could teach kids with best methods they have known from their experiences. In addition, children are a vital part of family which adults spent all of their time for after working time. Only by private studying homework with parents do pupils understand deeply knowledge from the class and develop personal skills. Some researches indicated that there is a great imitation from parents who follow and take care baby each action. Children usually copy behavior from mom and dad so building kid’s human dignity has a strong influence by parents.

Meanwhile, school provides various abilities in educating that are difficult to find in a family. Lessons in educational institutions are created from careful scientific researches for children’s development both in knowledge and skills. By no means do they understand about society and nature without fundamental learning in textbooks. School also are place that included diversity environment with different characteristics enhance kid’s capability in communication and social network. If children always are considered as an important people in their family, teachers cultivate their awareness about equality among people and require children efforts by themselves.

To teaching a kid to be a good member of society needs many supports. I suppose that family should not to be alone in assuming this responsibility. And school could not keep the role in their shoulders lonely. Sharing between both of them is the efficiency way for educating children.  

 

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These is essay is going to discuss that both these opinions own suitable arguments and society need the roles from parents as well as school.( in this essay, I will discuss both views and give some relative evidences to prove the roles of parents as wel as education at school) mìh nghĩ viết như z sẽ ổn hơn bạn nhé

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