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 Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers

Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Bài 1 : Em viết 
Recently, Student can easily learn online by accessing to the internet. While there are some benefit from that way, but i'd argue that it's more effectively to learn in the school with the teacher.

The option to learn through computer with the Internet is much comfortable for many reasons. Students are able to learn through the internet in everywhere, at everytime as long as they have internet connection. In this way, students will have a chance to control their schedule more actively, efficiently and can access to a massive source of information . For instance, you could  have less time to spend on transportation to get to the class which is about 10 km from where you live but still can get a huge knowledge . This way may lead to the flexibility in time control and more initiatively studying.
On the other hand, i believe that is more efficiently to learn in traditional ways - learning in school with teachers. Firstly, pupils can communicate with the teacher teaching you to get more information about the subject they specialize in and make sure that you completely absorb what she says. For example, if you have some questions or don't know a term in a subject you can ask the teacher immediately instead of finding solution in many forum on the internet. Secondly, Students may have get not only the knowledge but also the experience from the a senior. You will have more living skills and the realistic knowledge to avoid the mistake their teach used to make, the big advantage that learning online can't take.
For the reasons  i mentions above, it seems to me  that student are more efficiently to be learn if they keep learning  in school with their experienced teachers .


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  The issue of the impact of children’s tuition has heated up communal regardings especially education, dissenting voices given has sparked lots of controversies among people.According to some people, computers accessed to Internet play an important role in assisting children’s studying whereas the others argue that learning should be guided and directed by the experience of teachers.

  There are several reasons why many people in favour of learning online through the computers.Firstly, it is undeniable that the Internet is an invention used popularly in the field of education.With a computers accessed to the Internet , you can approach a fantastic source of information for students around the world, entry enormous benefits of technology such as email, social networks , online learning, online conferencing and other methods of tuitions. Whatever you are, only by linking to the Internet can you enhancing your personal understanding of how to solve difficulties in studying as well as giving lots of vital skills in readiness for later life. Futhermore , more and more online course of various departments are available on the Internet nowadays, it creates much opportunities for any students to learn in best condition.Thus,more students can receive degrees or certificates, diplomas which are confirmed on the global scale from many prestige universities worldwide.On the contrary to popular belief, the Internet may not be a reliable source for knowledge, when comparing to other sources , there is often conflicting between available information.

    On the other hand, a traditional and long-lasting learning, study with teachers,definitely is an effective methods of developing student’ s education.The teachers possessed the best-preparation programs especially impetuous passion about their subjects .They inspired all of us to play with ideas, think deeply about the subject matters , take on more challenging works and even pursue careers in a particular field of study.At school , student’s development is orchestrated stage by stage , step by step by experienced teachers, and their acquisition of knowledge is guided and backed up in a systematic way.But learning at school also have many disadvantages , students are taught followed an arranged timetables and processes that’s why trainees are put under constraint .

  To summerise, above methods of learning have both disadvantages and advantages.Based on each personal condition and demand, either of methods helps students to learn effectively.From my point of view , I feel that modern technologies can be more dominant than traditional studying, but we can’t replace the important role of teachers,

 

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Recently, Student can It is argued that learning online is an effective way for pupils nowadays easily learn online by accessing to the internet. While there are some benefit from that way, but i'd argue that it's more effectively to learn in the school with the teacher. However, others claim that learning in classrooms with teachers is still the best method. While I..., I also think...

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In conclusion, it seems to me that both teachers and computers definitely play a vital role to children's study.

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