Technics have Technology has more and more been going up for recent years. There have been many applications at domains, especially education. (There is an opinion that believes there will a complete substitution of teachers by technology in school.) (mình thấy câu này có vấn đề về ngữ pháp) I complete disagree with this opinion. Analyzing about having interest and care and in class where has teachers will prove this.
Firstly, when teacher was had artificial intelligence, students, especially young children, could not be given emotion as teachers who are human. Especially young children. Following a study in USA, children learn best when they have an emotional relationships with their teacher. Young children don't like(informal) encouragement from machine or mechanical stimulation. So, it would be longer if students completely learned with machine even the most robot in the world.
Second,artificial intelligence could not fulfil for demands and could not identify every emotion of students. For instance, the most modern robot in the world is ASIMO that could not identify every countenance of human. So, it is difficult to giving robots interpret clearly for students. Thus, it is easy to understand that if technics complete taught in classes, students would take long time to understand.
In summary, a artificial intelligence could not supply education needs and motivate for students. So, it is clearly to understand that replacing teacher by technics would not happen. Thus, traditional teacher would never repace be replaced by intelligence machine in the near future.
2 đoạn văn phần thân bài của bạn có 2 ý rất giống nhau (teachers --> emotional, technology--> emotionless) Theo mình 2 đoạn này có thể gộp làm 1 và bạn có thể thêm 1 đoạn nữa có thể nói về việc giáo viên mang vai trò giám sát học sinh/phát hiện tài năng của học sinh.