Advantages and disadvantages of transnational marriage

Question

Nowadays, as a growth of economic, international imigration, tourism and globalization have been increased. Therefore, there are more people different countries and nations get married together. It is a controversial issue because it's advantages and disadvantages. In the esa, technology and transfortation have been become modern and easy to use. This also cause marriage between couple that come from different nationality or cultural background. This period of adaptionis also a big chance to share culture and discover new things, this a the opportunity to open one's mind, put apart stereotypes and just discover other custom. If the people has children, they will be richer-culturaly speaking than others because they will speak two languages. Beside some advantages, there are some disadvantages of multimarriage. In the first place, we face the problem is language. One has to fly to another country, s/he has to learn a differnet language which s/he have ever know before. Second, when s/he get transnational marriage, s/he must go far away from family, so it loss of holiday tradition, s/he own custum and culture. Final, if a mixed coupe were to divorce, where would the kid live? All in all, internatioanl couples who divorce tend to have more difficult decision to make when compared to those who live in the same country. In conclusion, marriage between person from different nationalities is a beautiful thing. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.

Answer 1

Nowadays, as a growth of economic, international imigration, tourism and globalization have been increased <= this sentence makes no sense since growth as well as increase mean the same. Therefore, there are more people in different countries and nations get married together. It is a controversial issue because it's (=possession form is flawed its') advantages and disadvantages. In the esa era, technology and transfortation (?) have been become modernized and easy to use. This also cause marriage between couple that come from different nationality or cultural background (?). This period of adaptionis (you mean adaptations?) also a big chance to share cultures and discover new things, this is a the opportunity to open enrich one's mind, put apart stereotypes and just discover other customs. If the people has children, they will be richer-culturaly speaking than others because they will speak two languages. Besides some advantages, there are some disadvantages of multimarriage. In the first place, we face the problem is language. One has to fly to another country, s/he has to learn a differnet language which s/he have ever know before. Second, when s/he get transnational marriage, s/he must go far away from family, so it loss of holiday tradition, s/he own custum and culture. Final, if a mixed coupe were to divorce, where would the kid live? All in all, internatioanl (?) couples who divorce tend to have more difficult decision to make when compared to those who live in the same country. In conclusion, marriage between person from different nationalities is a beautiful thing. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.

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