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Nowadays, more and more people use facebook , a popular social networking. FB brings in many great advantages to the youths, the adults as well as to the business men. First of all, Fb is a website which allows us to communicate easily. It provides several features such as chatting, personal messaging and photo sharing, which enables  us to share information with other facebookers  conveniently. We can send pictures, videos and even some sweet greetings for someone we like. Besides, we can re-connect with old friends or someone who we have lost touch with for a long time. With the search function of fb, we can rapidly search for by entering the key words such as his/her  name or address. So, It is really amazing. In addition,people can use fb as an efficient place to advertise their products. We can only sit in the front of the computer, upload the advertisement and then enter share putton .In a few minutes,this advertisement will spread worldwide like wildfire. Thus we can save money instead of advertising  it on the mass media. To sum up, fb is a popular and useful website for everyone  to communicate,re-connect with old or lost friends and promote the businesses.
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Nowadays, going along with the rapid development of information technology, social media especially facebook is becoming very popular for youth. It brings many benefits for users.

First and foremost, it is a huge community for people around the world to connect with each other without the barrier of distances. No matter where you are, you are able to connect with others every corners around the world when there are a connected- internet and devices that install facebook. Facebook is a suitable place for those who want to make friends, chat, talk, discuss or even just want to share something to remove stress. Besides, people also create groups of their interests to gather like-minded ones to discuss topics they love. These days, facebook users spend more time talking with friends instead of the traditional way of a face-to-face meeting.

Secondly, facebook is also a great source of knowledge. It is easy to find your interests on facebook – just write down what you want to look for on the search box and then you will see an endless result. There are lots of sources called facebook fanpages, which are subjects, topics, newspaper agents, and famous people, worth following to get latest updates. For instance, English  is my interest so that I like and follow pages that related to English. Whenever I log on facebook, I will see a lot of useful things about English which help broaden and improve my English.

Lastly with businessmen and companies, facebook is an ideal place to do branding and exposure their products and services to customers and partners. After some simple steps by creating an account or fanpage and then updating  information about products and services there, their brand will be spreaded worldwide. The more people like, visit and share the page, the more popular that brand is known.

In conclusion, being a facebook user and taking its advantages is a good way to involve with this nonstop developing world.
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cảm ơn về bài viết của bạn.bải viết rất sâu sắc.mình mong nhận đc nhìu góp ý của bạn
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Nowadays, more and more people use facebook , a popular social networking. FB brings in many great advantages to the youths, the adults as well as to the business men. First of all, Fb is a website which allows us to communicate easily. It provides several features such as chatting, personal messaging and photo sharing, which enables  us to share information with other facebookers  conveniently. We can send pictures, videos and even some sweet greetings for someone we like. Besides, we can re-connect with old friends or someone who we have lost touch with for a long time. With the search function of fb, we can rapidly search for by entering the key words such as his/her  name or address. So, It is really amazing. In addition,people can use fb as an efficient place to advertise their products. We can only sit in the front of the computer, upload the advertisement and then enter share putton .In a few minutes,this advertisement will spread worldwide like wildfire. Thus we can save money instead of advertising  it on the mass media. To sum up, fb is a popular and useful website for everyone  to communicate,re-connect with old or lost friends and promote the businesses.

Hi bạn, mình có một số góp y nhỏ cho bài viết của bạn hay hơn.

More and more có thể thay increasing many people hay an increasing number of people.

FB brings in many great advantages to the youths, the adults as well as to the business men.- không viết tắt FB. và the adults as well as to the business men thành the adults as well as  the business men

So, It is really amazing- văn nói hơn là văn viết, câu ngắn quá, không giống văn học thuật, bạn nên viết lại.

Thus we can save money instead of advertising  it on the mass media. thành Thus, we can save money instead of advertising,  it on the mass media.

Dấu chấm và dấu chấm phẩy, dấu phẩy rất quan trọng trong bài essay, bạn nên chú ý kĩ. Nếu bạn sử dụng sai, ý nghĩa sẽ rất khác. Bài viết rất hay. chúc bạn thành công 

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thanks bạn về những góp ý.mk đang ôn đại học nên rất muốn trau dồi khả năng viết.bạn có thể giúp mk không?
Ok. Please feel free to reach me via my email: [email protected].
bài góp ý của 2 bạn rất hay ạ.ko bit các b có thể xem qua bài của t đc k :)) http://scholarshipplanet.info/check/3046/writing-task-topic-foreign-language-nguoi-chua-gium-minh-minh-viet-ielts-khoang-cham

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