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Family

(Influences of your parents on your characters)

A: Research indicates that parents’ intervention plays an important role in a child’s development. Do you think so?

B: I agree with you. When I was a child, my dad warned me that my video games would be taken away if I continued to leave my bicycle on the sidewalk, so until now I am in the habit of considering everything from all sides in order to make sure that I am not punished.

A: Like your father, my mom wanted to give me a sense of responsibility when I was 15 years old. That time, when I entreated her to give me the money to buy the new jeans, she said that I had to write 5 reasons why I needed to buy it but I could not.

B: Oh really? At last, did your mother say anything?

A: Ah, She said: “It’s a crime to waste money or time like that so you have to differentiate what you want and what you need.”

B: “Need” and “want”. That’s a good point.

A: That’s exactly what I think. Up to this time, before deciding anything, I always think of “need” - “want” and make up my mind certainly.

B: Similarly, in educating the children, my mother is also careful. The fruits, the vegetables, the meat, the skin-cleaner… are always considered carefully by her. She commends me from the smallest things so much that I am in the habit of that.

A: I will remember this useful point. Thank you for your sharing.

B: It’s my pleasure. Goodbye!

Answer 1

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