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Question

the bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who were born in three different areas: outside, urban and rural Australia in 1995 and 2010.

overall, cities attracted the massive amount of people through two stages, while people born outside Australia tended to higher compare with people born in australia.

to begin with people were born in cities. in 1995, the figure accounted for 60% in outside Australia and 50% in australia. then, two figures tended to increase in turn 80% and 65% in 2010.

in the contrast, rural areas expressed the terrible decline after 15 years. in the first stage, people born in australia accounted for 30% but decreased double in last stage. furthermore, people born outside australia showed the dropped was 8 times, the figure reach of 5% in 2010.

likewise, people in towns also expressed the decrease but not impressed. while in australia showed decrease of about 5%,