Some people believe that studying in a college or uinversity is the best way for student to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Question

           Nowadays, it has become a heavily debated topic whether students should be required to learn at universities or not. Some might hold the opinion that students will prepare for their good future occupation if they continue studying. However, others think that they should leave school as soon as possible. In my opinion, learning in a college or university is better than having no registration to study either on or out campus

            First of all, it is an indisputable fact that studying in a university is the best wy for students to repare for their future career. The sum of human knowlege is very wide, people will like fish out of the water in new work environment if they are not trained specialized knowledge. Despite having spent from four to five years learning at university, students will received college degrees. Therefore, it plays an important role in their curriculum vitae to have good chance for their future profession. Attendance to classes has many hardships but it will be the opportunity for ambitious students to succeed in their life.

            However, some people think that students should leave school and develop their job through work experience. Giving this decision because they are not interested in study - interest is the mother of all study - instead of many manual work. Some others work with innate ability such as singing or amateur photographer. On the other hand, their family condition  can not afford their student school free. They are compelled to go to work to increase income for themselves or their family.

            In conclusion, the road to success can be without university presence, however, the profession can be more stable if you have a thorough knowledge from college.

Answer 1

          First of all, it is an indisputable fact that studying in a university is the best way for students to repare for their future career. you should focus on spelling.hihi

The sum of human knowlege is very wide, people will like fish out of the water in new work environment if they are not trained specialized knowledge. I think that you should use to fish.hihi

Attendance to classes has many hardships, but it will be the opportunity for ambitious students to succeed in their life.

 However, some people think that students should leave school and develop their job through work experience. Giving this decision because they are not interested in study - interest is the mother of all study - instead of many manual work. Some others work with innate ability such as singing or amateur photographer. On the other hand, their family condition  can not afford their student school free. They are compelled to go to work to increase income for themselves or their family.

 

            In conclusion, the road to success can be without university presence, however, the profession can be more stable if you have a thorough knowledge from college.

i see that your essay is rather good.hihi

 

Answer 2

Nowadays, it has become a heavily debated topic whether students should be required to learn at universities or not. Some might hold the opinion that students will prepare for their good future occupation if they continue studying. However, others think that they should leave school as soon as possible

Recently, whether students should be required to learn at universities or not, this tendency has become a heavily debated topic. Some might hold the view that running a route into a college or univeristy is better while others believe that they should drop out of school to get a job.

First of all, it is an indisputable fact that studying in a university is the best wy for students to repare for their future career

 

Answer 3

• having no registration to study either on or out campus ( don't understand this idea because i don't think campus should be used here )
• The sum of human knowlege is very wide, so people will feel like fish out of the water in new work environment if they are not trained specialized knowledge (i'm not sure whether this clause is right or not but I would write it in another way: unless they are well equiped with a certain amount of knowledge related to their jobs/ specialized knowledge )
• have good chance --> have a good chance
• attendance to classes --> attendance at classes
• Giving this decision because they are not interested in study - interest is the mother of all study - instead of many manual work ( don't realize how this sentence is structured )
• singing or amateur photographer --> I think you should use only one word form: career (singer or photographer ) or skill ( singing or photography)
• without university presence --> the presence of uni

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