Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
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It is undeniable that globalization has brought to nations many advantages among of which appears the increase of job prospects. Regarding job opportunities, many people believe that it is beneficial to change companies a few times in their career life while others prefer working for specific organizations permanently.

 

It is highly recommended that employees should change their companies a few times in their lives. Changing organizations means to inhabit new workplaces, working environments, which will give them a huge boost to work. Indeed, working in a company for a long time can be such a boredom; meanwhile, experiencing a new workplace can help refresh their minds, motivate them to work relentlessly. Moreover, applying to a new company can always come with a more promising job opportunity. Nowadays, employees tend to quit their current jobs to apply to other companies, and due to their past working experiences, they can be more easily assigned to higher positions than fresh graduates, and along with a new job comes higher income.

 

However, many a person do prefer working for the same organizations throughout their career lives. The first reason for this decision is that their positions and benefits in the organizations are secured. For example, in governmental organizations in Vietnam, employees find it hard to get fired by the employers and their career promotions are steady. Besides, remaining in a certain company can be considered as a self-guarantee against the threat of being unemployed for a short time.

 

Briefly, since there are more job opportunities than there used to be, it is controversial whether an individual should work in an organization for his whole career life or often change the working organizations. Personally, I prefer changing companies every three years in order to obtain higher positions.

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It is undeniable that globalization has brought to nations many advantages among of which appears the increase of job prospects. Regarding job opportunities, many people believe that it is beneficial to change companies a few times in their career life (lives) while others prefer working for specific organizations permanently.

 

It is highly recommended that employees should change their companies a few times in their lives. Changing organizations means to inhabit new workplaces, working environments (struggle with a new workplace as well as a new working environment), which will give them a huge( tremendous would be better^^) boost to work. Indeed, working in a company for a long time can be such a boredom; meanwhile, experiencing a new workplace can help refresh their minds and motivate them to work relentlessly. Moreover, applying to a new company can always come with a more promising job opportunity. Nowadays, employees tend to quit their current jobs (use careers to avoid repeat the word ^^) to apply to other companies, and due to their past working experiences (exoerience), they can be more easily assigned to higher positions than fresh graduates, and along with a new job comes higher income.

 

However, many a person do prefer working for the same organizations (companies/enterprises) throughout their career lives. The first reason for this decision is that their positions and benefits in the organizations are secured. For example, in governmental organizations in Vietnam (in Vietnam governmental organizations), employees find it hard to get fired by the employers and their career promotions are steady. Besides, it is safer for people to work in the same companies than to change their workplaces as they do not encounter the threat of being unemployed for a short time.

 

Briefly, since there are more job opportunities than there used to be, it is controversial whether an individual should work in an organization for his whole career life or often change the working organizations. Personally, I prefer changing companies every three years in order to obtain higher positions.

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Briefly ( In conclusion ), since there are more job opportunities than there used to be, it is controversial

Cái này chỉ sửa thêm giúp bài văn bạn dài ra và giúp thông báo cho giám khảo là kết bài mà rất dễ nhớ !!! (:

Theo mình bài viết của bạn khá ổn nhưng vốn từ vựng của bạn ko đc phong phú nên lỗi lặp từ còn nhìu và số ít số nhiều bạn còn hơi hậu đậu vs cả bạn nên học thêm các cụm từ để bài văn hay hơn

Theo mình bài này có thể đạt đc mức 6.5

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