Ielts task 1 ngày 21/3/2020

Question

The picture describes the process of producing fertiliser from organic waste.

Overall, the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with the preparation of a plastic container and ending with composted organic garden fertiliser.

At the beginning of the process, a plastic container with 2 cubic meters which has multiple holes on its body that enable airflow is required for the cycling process from organic waste. This is followed by food, grass and newspaper are respectively layered into 15cm tall piles in the plastic container, after which nitrogen and hot water are added with the waste layers inside the container.

The process continues with the container is heated and kept being heated for 6 months, permitting decomposition to take place. After 6 months, the compost is ready to used for garden.

Answer 1

You wrote your essay pretty well. There are no spelling errors and unsuitable word choice. Congratulation!

However, there are some small errors. 

You lack transitional phrases which make your sentences flow smoothly. 

Your essay has a total 6 sentences, consisting of 131 words. We should have had 150 more words at least, but we did not have them.  

producing fertiliser  -> the production of fertiliser/ how to fertiliser prooduce

a number of steps -> five steps/stages

the process comprises a number of steps -> there is a step-by step process that is comprised of five stages.

This is followed by food, grass and newspaper are respectively layered into->At the second stage the process, food, grass and newspaper are respectively layered into

The process continues with the container is heated and kept being heated for 6 months -> The process continues with the container which is heated and kept being heated for 6 months

the compost is ready to used for garden -> the compost is ready to use for garden