TOPIC: Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.
In this day and age These days, traffic jam is on the increase, therefore, and it is posing a serious threat to many big cities in the world. This problem must be tackled immediately to reduce the traffic volume as many people living in those areas are seriously suffering from it every day.
One of the main culprits of this phenomenon is that people tend to prefer using theirpersonal vehicles to traveling by public transport because of their flexibility and comfortability. However, there are still some feasible solutions to this issue. Firstly, the government should enhance public transport in terms of punctuality. In Vietnam, many people do not like to minimize to travel by bus in that it does not arrive on schedule, which can affect their arrival can delay their arrival to work and also may cause various unwanted trouble for them. Therefore, the more punctual public transports are is, the more willing citizens are to people will opt for it them as their main vehicles.
On the other hand, In addition, I also believe there should be some incentives for people who frequently take travel by public transports, such as a gift, a free journey or a discount. This will act as a motivation for using the system as mass behaviors are often driven by marginal advantages humans have a tendency to take pleasure in receiving free presents or things that are beneficial to them. For instance, last year, bus passengers in Ho Chi Minh city were can be able to pay a lower cost for the tickets if they used by a card sponsored by Zalo Pay to make a purchase.
In conclusion, while traffic congestion is a solvable hard-solving problem that, it can be coped with by simply improving the mass transit's punctuality and by providing incentives to the travellers who commute by public transportation.
P/S: chú ý không lặp ý trong câu, còn idea thì ổn. Phần example ở HCM City đó mình nghĩ là nên bỏ ở thì HTĐ thì hay hơn.