(IELTS 5/6/2016) Nowadays, young people admire stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Question

These days, admiring celebrities is assumed to make many positive effects on fans' living. There are, however, many huge concerns about adverse ones. I, personally, would contend that this trend has both the merits of developments and its drawbacks. This essay will be discussed in-deeply below.

On the one hand, it brings an array of advantages. Firstly, the fans follow in the stars of footsteps. Indeed, they are perfect mirrors associated with many aspects of life like morality for fans to imitate. For example, many years ago, Emma Waston, talented actress and goodwill ambassador, made a moving speech about feminism motivating a massively huge number of women to have equal rights and breaking roughly stereotypes of gender. Similarly, the fans climb the labber of success. Behind gorgeous stages, the process of training and practising of the idols is a phenomenon worthing caring due to its sense of hard. Sometimes, the living of fans are in trouble; so this period of time of stars helps them have motivations to pass and continuously pursue their dreams.
On the other hand, its disadvantages can not be ignored. First and foremost, the fans are so so crazy about stars. Some tend to blindly adored. It is illustrated by the event of a hard period of the country when central areas are impacted seriously by natural disasters; many fans accidentally donate a massive amount of money just to make fame for their foreign idols. Additionally, the fans imitate unsuitable things. There is a permanent gap between idols and fans. Irrespective of ages and jobs, some imitate to create colourful hairs, tatoo or too sexy clothes.


Overall, from the points I discussed above, I assume that this trend impacts both positively and negatively.


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