What event is important in your life ?

Question

When it comes to a milestone life event in each person's life, a day to become 18 years old is a meaningful time. I was 18 years old four months ago and had something change in my life. Before turning this time, I did not have a lot of communication with other people. I always work alone, stay at home and join few activities.

However, I became more confident, like taking part in the club in school and speaking in public. When I was fifteen, I hated learning English because of a boring subject. As soon as I studied in grade 12, I  aware of the importance of English. If I have many languages, I will have a better chance of making my dream come true. To make it real, I must work hard, study and study every day. By this age, it's like something that motivates you to be successful.

Not only myself but also people in Vietnam and other countries will have to change  in their lives

in their mind at 18. 

Answer 1

When it comes to a milestone life event in each person's life, a day to become 18 years old is a meaningful time. I was 18 years old four months ago and had something change in my life. Before turning this time, I did not have a lot of communication with other people. I always work alone, stay at home and join few activities.

However, I became more confident, like taking part in the club in school and speaking in -->  in front of public. When I was fifteen, I hated learning English because of a boring subject. As soon as I studied in grade 12, I  aware of à --> understand  / am aware of the importance of English. If I have  -->  can speak many foreign languages, I will have a better chance of making my dream come true -->  more chances to reach my dreams. To make it is real, I must work hard, study and study every day. By this age, it's like something that motivates you to be successful.

Not only myself but also people in Vietnam and other countries will have to change in their lives

in their mind at 18.