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Communicating devices such as mobile phones or computers are becoming unattached to most people nowadays, along with the development of technology, especially Internet. However, I must agree with some opinions that the communication ability is greatly affected from such communicating method.
To be fair, the development of technology, correspondently with mobile phones and computers bring to modern users many practical advantages. The reason is because, virtual communication has exceeded beyond countries; for instance, people could immediately receive an email from another just from 3 seconds of hitting the ‘send’ button, or students studying aboard could call their parents anytime if they are currently online. None of mobile phones or computers’users could deny the efficiency of having fast and virtually directed conversations from different places on the Earth, just by having an Internet connection.
However, many inconveniences and long-term effects could be a fairly strong reasons to be against virtual communication. Firstly, conversations through digital devices, are basically transferring mere texts, images, emoticons: it is not a face-to-face conversation. This could lead to frequent confusion or misunderstanding, due to many reasons such as using unappropriate emoticons. The main reason of this problem is because basically in normal conversations, people are not entirely focusing on verbal content, but focusing more on body languages, inverbal signs, such as eyes’ movements or their partner’s posture. Communicating without seeing the partner is apparently easier to tell lies as much as it could cause confusion just because they can’t see each other’s faces.
In additional to the first reason, in terms of biology, when people are having a face-to-face conversations, many parts of the brain which involve emotions work actively. However, in virtual conversations, these specific parts of the brain doesn’t work much, causing the individual to lose the ability of sensing signs of emotions in others. It is recently reported that people who are sticking to their computers all days, are more emotionally distant from others, as they growed dependance in their mobile phones. These people find it hard to communicate to other people face-to-face because it is confusing to them to spot inverbal signs.
To sums up, technology is only developed in favour of a better connection, yet it still has its limitation. To gain benefits from both sides, in my opinion, people nowadays should engage more in normal conversations and reduce the time using digital devices to communicate as much as possible, for any connection is built through an absolute and mutual understanding between one and another.