write paragraph about the most memorable movie you have seen

Question

I would like to tell you about a film I have seen. the film that the most impression on me is a film called " Chernobyl". Chernobyl is a film about the nuclear disaster in the ukraina, with the treatment and relief efforts of factory workers, citizens and government after the disaster. the three characters is Jared Harris (The Terror) plays a nuclear expert brought in to evaluate the situation, supported and hindered by officials (Stellan Skarsgard) and other scientists (Emily Watson). I could not blink an eye during the whole movie.  I am extremely impressed with the view of people gathered at the bridge looking at the column The smoke rose in the chernobyl. They admired the view amidst ashes flying in the air. Scenes with melodious music and faces with a hint of anxiety but still calm when not knowing the impending disaster of the townspeople. It was really a fantastic film. When you finish watching, you realize that chernobyl was not warning humanity about the dangers of atomic energy, but the lesson is that lies, arrogance and suppressing information are the most dangerous. In summary, Chernobyl is one of the greatest movies that I’ve ever. seen.rogance

Answer 1

hello sweetie! I'd like  have some comment on your paragraph.The first wrong point of your paragraph is

 the film that the most impression on me is a film -> this one sounds a little bit weird for me( translate it and you can see the problem more clearly)  and you have to know what type of word you should use in this sentence too .U can change the wording into some sentences for example :"The film that have a deep influence on me is...  or the film which impressed me a lot is....

in the ukraina- don't use the with name of a country( except the usa or uk etc)-> you might need to learn again the articles thematic.

also with the treatment and relief efforts of factory workers don't use with here you should .Just after flicking through your paragraph.I strongly recommend that u have to learn again to make sure that your grammar is stable enough to write a paragraph

and by the way you have to learn the passive voice again too I am extremely impressed with the view of people gathered at the bridge looking at the column The smoke rose in the chernobyl. change with -> by

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