Write a paragraph about the film you like the most

Question

Every one has their own favorite film, and I am not an exception. Have you ever heard Big Hero 6? This is a computer- animated film, produced by Walt Disney. Context of the film is a fictional city, San Fransokyo, where Hiro Hamada,a 14-year-old robotics genius, with Baymax, lives. Baymax is a invention of Tadashi, Hiro ‘s brother, for the purpose of health care. With the intellegence of Hiro, he creates tools for fighting superhero squad, with Baymax and four friends of Tadashi. They investigate a Kabuki-masked man who steals Hiro's microbots and prevent a disater happening in this city. The reason I am crazy about the film is that picture and soundtrack are wonderful. Hardly anyone who once saw this movie can forget scenes about the ancient houses, lanterns, cherry-blomssom which are Japanese features and Golden Gate Bridge in the USA. In addition, you can’t believe in your eye with many miraculous inventions. Thanks to these factors, the film win Academy Award . It is worth watching it.

Answer 1

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"Every one (everyone) has their own favorite film, and I am not an exception. Have you ever heard Big Hero 6? This is a computer- animated film, produced by Walt Disney. Context of the film is a fictional city, San Fransokyo, where Hiro Hamada,a 14-year-old robotics genius, with Baymax, lives. Baymax is a invention of Tadashi, Hiro ‘s brother, for the purpose of health care. With the intellegence of Hiro, he creates tools for fighting superhero squad, with Baymax and four friends of Tadashi. They investigate a (the) Kabuki-masked man who steals Hiro's microbots and prevent a disater happening in this city. The reason I am crazy about the film is that picture and soundtrack are wonderful. Hardly anyone who once saw this movie can forget scenes about the ancient houses, lanterns, cherry-blomssom which are Japanese features and Golden Gate Bridge in the USA. In addition, you can’t believe in your eye with many miraculous inventions. Thanks to these factors, the film win Academy Award . It is worth watching it."