1. Write about the reasons why students decide to attend your university (about 250 words)

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            There are many different reasons why students choose to  apply and study in University of Languages and International Studies.

            Firstly, in terms of individual factor, one of the most common reason is that students have a great interest and enormous and natural love to the university. According to students interviewed, they dreamed to become a member of Ulis when they were very small, which was a reason why they apply for the university.

            Secondly, another important reason is university's facility and learning environment for studying. To reinforce the point, learners choose the university because of large and comfortable places for both self-studying and learning in class such as French department; A2, B2 buildings. Moreover, there are many big libraries with interesting and useful books and free wifi, which  necessarily assist students' study. Besides, the university teaching faculty is professional and high experiences. Lectures, who are almost M.A, Dr. or have high degrees, are very enthusiatic and sympathetic than any other universities.

            Last but not least, learners apply to the univrsity because of their future. When students study in the university, they will have a good skills in many other fields including: teaching, interpreting, transltaing and so on. Likewise, studying in the university, students are likely to find jobs easier as employers and businesses believe knowledge and communicative skill of Ulisers.
            In conclusion, there are many main reasons mentioned above to apply and learn in Ulis are students' love, facility and learning environment and future careers.

 

 

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There are many different reasons why students choose to  apply and study in University of Languages and International Studies.

            Firstly, in terms of individual factor, one of the most common reasons is that students have a great interest and enormous and ( should be removed) natural love to the university. According to students interviewed, they dreamed to become a member of Ulis when they were very small (a little child), which was the reason why they apply for the university.

            Secondly, another important reason is university's facilities and learning environment for studying. To reinforce the point, learners choose the university because of large and comfortable places for both self-studying and learning in classes such as French department; A2, B2 buildings. Moreover, there are many big libraries with not only interesting and useful books but also free wifi, which necessarily assist students' study. Besides, the university teaching faculty is professional and high experiences. Lectures  , who are almost M.A, Dr. or have high degrees are very enthusiastic and sympathetic than any other universities.

            Last but not least, learners apply to the University because of their future. When students study in the university, they will have a good skills in many other fields including: teaching, interpreting, Translating and so on. Likewise, studying in the university, students are more likely to find jobs easier as employers and businesses believe knowledge and communicative skill of Ulisers.
            In conclusion, there are many main reasons mentioned above to apply and learn in Ulis, which are students love, facilities and learning environment and future careers.

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