In recent year years, have seen that the global warming is rising has been rising at an alarm alarming level and threatens the existence of alll all living the living on the earth. In this essay, I will present the main reason reasons of global warming and propose some possible solutions.
The predominant factor resulting in the warming of the earth is carbon dioxide ( CO2) (CO2) which is caused by major human activities. An obvious example, is that the burning of fossil fuels to generate electricity have has disposed a large of amount CO2. According to an environmental report in the US in 2000, coal - burning power plants produced about 2000 billion tons of CO2 everyear every year. In addition, a significant amount of CO2 is emitted by industrial zones. Another example of those emissons emissions is the transport sector. The need for people to commute to work or school have has lead to increase the number of vehicles on the streets. Additionally, cheap air travel is actracting attracting more and more people. Consequently, every year, the amount of CO2 is released into the atmosphere grow grows, which make makes global temperature to rise.
There are some methods to address this problem. First, governments should ban using electricity from fossil fuels and convert to into environmentally friendly resources such as wind - turbine, solar, and tidal. Furthermore, gorvenments governments need to enforce laws which retrict retrict pollutants emission in manufactories manufactures.[Law nào? Cụ thể ra sao? Là một idea mới hay chỉ để bổ sung cho phần trước?] Second, individuals can play a part in global warming reduction via changing lifestyles. Regarding transport, people should use means of transport which are powred powered by solar energy or biodiesel and only travel when really necessary. Moreover, using led bulb and turning off electronic device when going out can help. [Ý thứ 2 này còn ngắn, bổ sung thêm 1 câu nữa để củng cố lập luận]
In conclusion, almost most/ almost all the human activities in daily life is are majority major cause of global warming. Therefore, governments and individuals have to together take actions on this issue by directing renewable resouces resources, cuting cutting greenhouse gas emission from industries and car, saving energy.
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