Children nowadays are not healthy and fit as the past generation children. What might be the reasons? How can it be solved?
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We know that children are future of humanity and the world in the near future . They are cared and given the best things . But nowadays children are not as strong as their fathers or mothers in the past . It is one of the most problems is facing in the world now . My essay will elaborate on cause and some solutions for it .

  Many reasons could cause the decrease in the health and one of the biggest is diet from they were born to the present is affecting so much . In theory ,a child should be sucked its mother as much as better or at least 6 months . But now ,the mother they must go to work to earn money or have much attention to their appearance , they use milk powder or nutritious food to nourish their offspring  . It reduces resistances in the body of young children . Furthermore , food is not safe or fast food that children eat everyday also affect the growing up of themselves.

   In addition , children of the present must go to study so much . Out of time in the school ,they have to study with tutors and time to self- study, do homeworks is full a day . Thus , no leisure to relax , take exercise as their grandparent did . One the other hand , we also must talk about public area to they have a place to have fun and the pollution of the environment .

    There are several things we can do to deal with this problem . First of all , we must pay all attention to daily diet of children especially newborns and children are growing up . then, establish more  place of amusement ,parks quickly . Finally,  the parent should reduce time to study to children have time to play .It also help them study better.

    In conclusion , children are affected so much by adults and the development of the world . We must have actions immediately to improve health for children , to them healthier and stronger , so they can make their own dreams .
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We know that children are future of humanity and the world in the near future . They are cared and given the best things . But nowadays children are not as strong as their fathers or mothers in the past . It is one of the most burning problems that has to be facing in the world now . My essay will elaborate on causes and some solutions for it .

  Many reasons could cause the decrease in the health and one of the biggest ones is diet that people use from a newborn baby to the present is affecting so much . In theory ,a child should be sucked its mother as much as better or at least 6 months . However, at presenty, the mothers must go to work to earn money or have much attention to their appearance , they use milk powder or nutritious food to nourish their offspring  . It reduces resistances in the body of young children . Furthermore , food is not safe or fast food that children eat everyday also affect the growing up of themselves.

   In addition , children of the present must go to study so much . Out of time in the school ,they have to study with tutors and time to self- study, do homeworks is full a day . Thus , no leisure to relax , take exercise as their grandparent did . One the other hand , we also must talk about public area to they have a place to have fun and the pollution of the environment .

    There are several things we can do to deal with this problem . First of all , we must pay all attention to daily diet of children especially newborns and children are growing up . then, establish more  place of amusement ,parks quickly . Finally,  the parent should reduce time to study to children have time to play .It also help them study better.

    In conclusion , children are affected so much by adults and the development of the world . We must have actions immediately to improve health for children , to them healthier and stronger , so they can make their own dreams .

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In addition , children of the present must go to study so much . Out of time in the school ,they have to study with tutors and
have time for self- study; doing homeworks is full a day . Thus , no leisure to relax , take exercise as their grandparent did in the past . One the other hand , we also must mention about the public area so that they can have a place to have fun. (bỏ the pollution of the environment)

    There are several things we can do to deal with this problem . First of all , we must pay more attention to the daily diet of children especially newborns and children who are growing up . then, we should establish more  place of amusement and parks quickly . Finally,  the parent should reduce the time for studying of children so that they can have time to play .It also a factor that helps them study better.

    In conclusion , children are affected so much by adults and the development of the world . We must have actions immediately to improve the health for children and help them healthier and stronger , so that they can make their own dreams .

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