Bài IELTS Task 2 - Discussion - ĐỀ DƯỚI BÀI VIẾT
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Accompanied with the continuous advancement of the technology in the world, the demand of transporting is increasing more and more. It is supposed that a large amount of money should be spent to establish new railway lines in order for trains to transport faster between rural areas while others assume that amount should be used to enhance the standard of available means of transport. In this essay, we will discuss both of these views and with my perception, I am in favor of notion supporting the way building more new lines for railways.

On the one hand, first and foremost, using money to improve existing public transport helps them be more and more progressive. Due to the fact that public means of transport are levelled up, not only can people use ones familiar for them but they also can experience more convenient things. In addition, in terms of improving available transport, it helps restrict the pollution and the lack of paths. If we construct too many new transport, the areas will be minimised and become narrower. Thus, focussing on those transport doesn’t spend as much money as building new ones and the rest of money can be used in doing other beneficial things.

On the other hand, spending funds on constructing new railway lines also has many benefits. In the first place, it helps people to transport faster and faster. The newer trains always have many progressive engine and the living’s standard of people is also enhanced. Moreover, the technology in the world is developing more and more from times to times, so that spending money to build new transport helps us access closer to the continuous advancement in the world. Finally, the demands of people is higher and higher, so the nation has to execute many policies developing the standard of the facilities in order to meet those demands. Therefore, using a large amount of nation’s funds to establish new means of transport, especially new railway lines, is unavoidable.

All things considered, that using money should be invested to build new railway lines or to improve available means of transport is depended on the state of areas. In my standpoint, I approve of the idea supporting the establishment of new transport.

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If we construct too many new transport, the areas will be minimised and become narrower. Thus, focusing on those transport doesn’t does not spend as much money as building new ones 

Finally, the demands of people is higher and higher, so the nation has to execute many policies developing the standard of the facilities in order to meet those demands. 

 

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Bài này ổn nha bạn! Idea khá ok! Nhưng bạn không được viết tắt trong essay nha
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