Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Question

 In this day and age, commercial advertisements is   considered an effective way to introduce products to consumers.  There are those who maintain that this advertising helps popularize new goods that enhance people’s living standard. Others think that this trend can make people waste money on unnecessary things. From my point of view, I think this trend has  both positive and negative effects on customers

On the one side, it is no denying that  some advertisements  provide a lot useful information  about new products  ,which  allows consumers have more suitable choices. For example, people were wondering to buy a new cooker, they can take into consideration more new models with their advantages so that they can buy the best one. As a result, the consumers can save their budget as well as improve their living condition.  

   On the other side, some advertisements were released with a view to persuade customers to make a purchase regardless of their true needs. To meet their sales, some brands often exaggerate the usefulness and function of products. For examples, the latest Samsung smartphone seems no different from the predecessor except for the a slightly faster processor, but this brand marketers are skillful enough to convince customers that their older phones are obsolete and they need to upgrade their phone.

To sum up, advertising plays a vital role in our life , however, we need to take into account before deciding to buy any goods to avoid spending on unnecessary things.

 

Answer 1

In this day and age, commercial advertisements is are considered as an effective way to introduce products to consumers. There are those who Some people maintain that this advertising helps popularize new goods that enhance people’s living standard. Others think that this trend can make people waste money on unnecessary things. From my point of view, I think this trend has  both positive and negative effects on customers.

 

On the one side, it is no denying that  some advertisements  provide a lot of useful information about new products which allows consumers to have more suitable choices. For example, people were wondering if people are considering to buy a new cooker, they can take into consideration more new models with their advantages so that they can buy the best one. As a result, the consumers can save their budget as well as improve their living condition.  

 

   On the other side, some advertisements were released with a view to persuade customers to make a purchase regardless of their true needs. To meet their sales, some brands often exaggerate the usefulness and function of products. For examples, the latest Samsung smartphone seems no different from the predecessor except for the a slightly faster processor, but this brand marketers are skillful enough to convince customers that their older phones are obsolete and they need to upgrade their phone.

 

To sum up, advertising plays a vital role in our life , however, we need to take into account before deciding to buy any goods to avoid spending on unnecessary things. (The conclusion need to be a short  cover of body: pros and cons of advertisements, not including other information)

 

 

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