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Question

 

The line graph provides information about the propotion of male and female smokers per 1000 residents in Someland over the period of four decades starting from 1960.

As can be seen from the graph, it’s evident that the rate of men who smoked witnessed a downward trend. Meanwhile, the rate of women’s in Someland experienced a upward trend despite some fluctuations over the given year.

In 1960, there are about 600 men who smoked per 1000 people. Overtime, the rate of male smokers rend to go down. From 1960 to 1985, the ratio of men who smoked in Someland decline nearby 200 people each 1000 citizents. Between 1985 to 2000, it’s bottom out at about 150 residents. In 2000, there are 250 male smokers.

Whereas, in 1960, there are 100 female smokers each 1000 residents. In 1975, the rate of women who smoked in someland reach a peak at approximate 300 people. The remaining period, it’s mildly decline from 300 to 200 females smokers per 1000 citizents.

Answer 1

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The line graph provides information about the proportion of male and female smokers per 1000 residents in Someland over the period of four decades starting from 1960.

As can be seen from the graph, it’s evident that the rate of men who smoked witnessed a downward trend. Meanwhile, the rate of women’s in Someland experienced an upward trend despite some fluctuations over the given year.

In 1960, there are about 600 men who smoked per 1000 people. Over time, the rate of male smokers rend to go down. From 1960 to 1985, the ratio of men who smoked in Someland decline nearby 200 people each 1000 citizens. Between 1985 to 2000, it’s bottom out at about 150 residents. In 2000, there are 250 male smokers.

Whereas, in 1960, there are 100 female smokers every 1000 residents. In 1975, the rate of women who smoked in someland reach a peak of approximately 300 people. In the remaining period, it’s mildly declined/declining from 300 to 200 females smokers per 1000 citizens.

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Answer 2

In 1960, there are (were) about 600 men who smoked per 1000 people

 

Answer 3

 From 1960 to 1985, the ratio of men who smoked in Someland declined to nearby 200 people each 1000 citizents

Answer 4

In 2000, there are (were) 250 male smokers.

Answer 5

 Between 1985 to 2000, it’s bottomed out at about 150 residents

Answer 6

Whereas, in 1960, there are (were) 100 female smokers each 1000 residents. In 1975, the rate of women who smoked in someland reach a peak at (of) approximate 300 people. The remaining period, it’s mildly decline from 300 to 200 females smokers per 1000 citizents.

Answer 7

The remaining period, it’s mildly declined from 300 to 200 females smokers per 1000 citizens.