Mọi người vào sửa giùm mình với - Helpful Person
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            How is the helpful person?? Different people have different responds to this question. I make sure that three kinds of  persons  below will show you the satisfying  answer.

            One of the particularly helpful person is that the people have time availability. They have free time so they can make use of it to do many other works. Students, for example; is a giant human resource. They are active, clever and enthusiastic persons. After school, they take on some voluntary works in the public area. They contribute their strength in places having high population density as bus stops to inform and control the number of people get on or get off the bus. Although some actions are tiny, they are so essential in rush hours. Because this helps the traffic to through.

            The helpful persons are not only enthusiastic persons but special persons also. They are the singers, the doctors or the actors. They have public relationships and the financial ability. So they can advantage it to raise the charity. For instance; a group singer is able to organize some live shows in order to help the poor or orphaned children. They also find financial resources or the donators to bring a better life to them. Moreover connecting the fund for hunger eradication and poverty alleviation gives hand to establish a huge finance is good solution.

            A further consideration is that the helpful persons are the professional persons. They are good at many different fields. So these are useful about the life aspects. For example; the doctor is able to discover new method to cure the patient. The teacher can also teach amazing things to the students. All is passion and ambition persons  to bring the flowers to the life.

            In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that they are wonderful persons. I believe that the life will be more and more better when we have the helpful persons around.

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            How is the helpful person?? Different people have different responds to this question. I make sure that three kinds of  persons  below will show you the satisfying  answer.

            One of the particularly helpful person is that the people have  avalability time . They have free time, so they can make use of it to do many other works.For example ; Students are a giant human resource. They are active, clever and enthusiastic persons. After school, they take on some voluntary works in the public areas. They contribute their strength in places having high population density as bus stops to inform and control the number of people get on or get off the bus. Although some actions are tiny;however, they are so essential in rush hours. Because this helps the traffic to through.

            The helpful persons are not only enthusiastic persons,but special persons also. They are the singers, the doctors or the actors. They have public relationships and the financial ability. So they can advantage it to raise the charity. For instance; a group singer is able to organize some live shows in order to help the poor or orphaned children. They also find financial resources or the donators to bring a better life to them. Moreover connecting the fund for hunger eradication and poverty alleviation gives hand to establish a huge finance is a good solution.

            A further consideration is that the helpful persons are the professional persons. They are good at many different fields. So these are useful about the life aspects. For example; the doctors are able to discover some new methods to cure their patients. The teachers can also teach amazing things to their students. All is passion and ambition persons  to bring the flowers to the life.

            In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that they are wonderful persons. I believe that the life will be better and better when we have the helpful persons around .

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Nhận xét chung:

- Bạn nên phân biệt person và people nha: person là số ít, còn people là số nhiều. Số nhiều và số ít là một kiến thức rất cơ bản đối với người học tiếng Anh. Bạn tập trung đừng để mắc những lỗi cơ bản như vậy, sẽ mất rất nhiều điểm nha bạn

- Bạn phân biệt giữa cách dùng "the" và "a" phân biệt tính từ với danh từ nữa nhé

How What is the helpful person?? Different people have different responds to this question. I make sure that three kinds of  persons  people below will show give you the satisfying  answer.

            One of the particularly helpful person is that the people have time availability  A person who have much time available is the first particular one. They have free time so they can make use of it to do many other works things. Students, for example; areis a giant human resources. They are active, clever and enthusiastic persons. After school, they take part in many social and voluntary activies. take on some voluntary works in the public area. They contribute their strength in many places having high population density as  to crowded places, for example bus stops to they inform and control the number of people get on or get off the bus at the bus station. Although some actions are tiny, they are so they are small actions but have a big meaning essential in rush hours. Because this helps the traffic to through.

            The helpful persons people are not only enthusiastic persons ones but also special people persons also. They are the singers, the doctors or the actors. They have public relationships and the financial ability. So they can advantage it to raise the charity. For instance; a group of singers is able to organize some live shows in order to help/raise fund for the poor or orphaned children. They also find financial resources or the donators to bring a better life to them/help them have a better life. Moreover connecting the fund for hunger eradication and poverty alleviation gives hand to or establishing a huge finance fund is are good solutions.

            A further consideration is that the helpful persons are the professional persons. They are good at many different fields. So they have many meaningful contributions to the world these are useful about the life aspects. For example; the  doctor is able to discover new method to cure the patients. The a teacher can also teach amazing things to the students. All is passion passonate and ambition ambitious persons  to bring the flowers to the life.

            In conclusion, there is no denying denial the fact that they are wonderful persons. I believe that the life will be more and more better and better when we have the helpful persons around.

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cảm ơn bạn, mình đang đọc lại bản chữa của bạn. cảm ơn rất nhiều
A person who have much time available is the first particular one.
Câu này phải là HAS đúng ko bạn ?
Ừm, sorry bạn nha, chỗ đó has mới đúng :)

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