topic :Ethinic group

Question

Our country has 54 ethnic groups, each country has its own unique color and tradition. Among them, the Thai ethnic group is considered as one of the most beautiful ethnic groups. The Thai live mainly in the north and north of central regions  Lai Chau, Dien Bien, Son La, Yen Bai, Hoa Binh, Nghe An and Thanh Hoa. Their language belongs to the Tay-Thai group. The Thai ethnic group also has other names: Tay Thanh, Man Thanh, Tay Muoi, Tay Muong, Hang Tong, Tay Do and Tho. The main population here is 1,040,549 people. The Thai originated from inland Southeast Asia where their ancestors have lived ancient times.The Thai are good at farming .They grow different crops.The main food is rice ,especially sticky rice .Thai cloth is well -known for being unique ,colorful and strong .Thai men like to wear The Kinh "s style of dress ,but Thai women keep their traditional and customs.They live in stilts houses. The Thai worship their ancestors.They hold festivals and ceremonies every year.

Answer 1

topic :Ethinic group  => topic :Ethnic group

The Thai live  => The Thai lives

where their ancestors have lived ancient times  =>  where their ancestors have lived in ancient times

The Thai are good at farming =>  The Thai is good at farming

but Thai women keep their traditional and customs => but Thai women keep their traditions and customs

They live in stilts houses => They live in stilt houses

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Our country has 54 ethnic groups, each country has its own unique color and tradition. Among them, the Thai ethnic group is considered as one of the most beautiful ethnic groups. The Thai lives mainly in the north and north of central regions  Lai Chau, Dien Bien, Son La, Yen Bai, Hoa Binh, Nghe An and Thanh Hoa. Their language belongs to the Tay-Thai group. The Thai ethnic group also has other names: Tay Thanh, Man Thanh, Tay Muoi, Tay Muong, Hang Tong, Tay Do and Tho. The main population here is 1,040,549 people. The Thai originated from inland Southeast Asia where their ancestors have lived in ancient times. The Thai is good at farming. They grow different crops.The main food is rice, especially sticky rice. Thai cloth is well -known for being unique, colorful and strong. Thai men like to wear The Kinh 's style of dress, but Thai women keep their traditions and customs. They live in stilt houses. The Thai worship their ancestors. They hold festivals and ceremonies every year.

 

Ngoài ra, có một đoạn mình chưa hiểu lắm: 

The Thai lives mainly in the north and north of central regions Lai Chau, Dien Bien, Son La, Yen Bai, Hoa Binh, Nghe An and Thanh Hoa

có thể bạn nên sửa thành :

The Thai lives mainly in the north and north of central regions of Lai Chau, Dien Bien, Son La, Yen Bai, Hoa Binh, Nghe An and Thanh Hoa

hoặc

The Thai lives mainly in the north and north of central regions, such as Lai Chau, Dien Bien, Son La, Yen Bai, Hoa Binh, Nghe An and Thanh Hoa

 

Và câu này : The Thai originated from...., bạn có thể thay thế bằng câu này có nghĩa tương đương: The Thai has their origins from... vì trong một cuốn sách mình đọc viết như vậy:  

đây là link sách nếu bạn cần: http://xqdoc.imedao.com/166eb7278f3556e3fe9dc3ef.pdf , trang 190 nhé :))

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