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Question

Dear sir/ madam......... I’m...........For a long time, I have placed great admiration on your foundation and growth, efficient running, remuneration policy for employees and perfect products’ quality (take my hat off to your foundation and growth… quality/ hold your foundation and growth… quality in high esteem). I’m avid for being a piece of the action (Being a piece of the action is my scorching heat passion). When I see your job advertisement in Accountant position, I realize this is a chance for myself (I can’t miss this boat/ I can’t lose the opportunity/ this is a scope for my ability). I write this letter for applying without any hesitation (I needn’t sleep on writing this letter……/ I even don’t need more time to give a second thought to applying for that position/ I am never in 2 minds about writing this letter……/ I’m not in backward in writing this letter…).

I’ve graduated in Accounting with a good degree from Foreign Trade University. While studying in University, I have worked as an accountant in some companies. For more information, I hold an Ielts Certificate Band 7.0, an immediate HSK. Enthusiasm, patience, whole heart, running up against challenge are all my names. I am willing to learn and do what takes to get a job done well even under pressure. Although I’m a fresh graduate, I believe that I can be well- suited to your company’ requirements. If you give me this opportunity, I definitely won't let you down (I will prove to you that your choice is true/ I will come over your expectation).

Please consider the enclosed resume to know more about my professionalism, background and skills. I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.
Yours sincerely,

Answer 1

Bài này mắc lỗi cơ bản là formal letter thì bạn không được phép viết tắt nhé.