Essay on Hobby

Question

Hello everyone, My name is Thanh.

I think nobody have no any hobby and it is may be that they have different hobbies. Someones engjoy sports like footballs, tennis, or swimming, some others prefer musics or movies, and other people interested in collecting somethings that they enjoy.

In my opinion, the hobby can help us improve our health and make our life more exciting. Spending time for what we enjoy can make us avoid stressfull after hard work time, and also improve our material and spiritual life.

In my case, I very keen on travelling with my family or my friends, especially to the countrieside with fresh air and food. Visiting a new place can be a way retring after a long hard - work time, and thereby we also discover somethings new like wonderfull view, dilicious meals or special cultures,…I fell extremly comfortable after a trips of travelling with my family, and it make me have more powerfull coutinuing my work. I remember three mounths ago I and my friends visited a exciting place, it is Lach River in Khanh Vinh distrist. We have had a wonderfull time here with special activities such cooking outside, swimming, playing traditional game,… and I bet that was a memoriable trips for everyone.

That is some words that I want to share here, and how about you? Let me know somethings about your hobby.

 

Answer 1

Hello everyone, My name is Thanh.

I think nobody has no any hobby and it is maybe that they have different hobbies. Someones engjoy sports like footballs, tennis, or swimming, some others prefer musics or movies, and other people interested in collecting somethings that they enjoy.

In my opinion, the hobby can help us improve our health and make our life more exciting. Spending time for what we enjoy can make us avoid stressfull after hard work time, and also improve our material and spiritual life.

In my case, I very keen on travelling with my family or my friends, especially to the countrieside with fresh air and food. Visiting a new place can be a way retring after a long hard - work time, and thereby we also discover somethings new like wonderfull view, dilicious meals or special cultures,…I fell extremly comfortable after a trips of travelling with my family, and it makes me have more powerfull coutinuing to countinue doing my work. I remember three mounths ago I and my friends visited an exciting place, it is Lach River in Khanh Vinh distrist. We have had a wonderfull time here with special activities such as cooking outside, swimming, playing traditional games,… and I bet that was a memoriable trips for everyone.

That is some words that I want to share here, and how about you? Let me know somethings about your hobby.

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